film sound review

Inaccurate heading (a minor point)

Use of "review" words like fascinating, etc. This is a cool analysis, and our thoughts about how we like something or how great we think something is not pertinent.

The major points, though are the following:

The second paragraph (beginning with "Accordingly,..." is interesting to me personally, but doesn't belong in this paper. I thought the beginning of real analysis came with the sentence near the top of page two that began with "Specifically..." That idea is something that you could have dug into for the whole central idea of the paper. Also, the bottom of page three, your observations AND ANALYSIS of the contrast between what is going on between Max and Furiosa are what the paper needs more of. 

The rest of the paper includes a few descriptions of sound, but doesn't analyze how that sound is used. The same with the next-to-last paragraph. Ironically, your last paragraph sums things up nicely and could have been your opening paragraph.

A page of references isn't necessary.

The bottom line is that there is too much simple observation without analysis, and too much on how the sound was made, when the focus should have been simply on how the sound is used to advance the film's goals.