Need Assistance with Assignment OM Del2
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NELDAURBINA---Deliverable2-StrategicPlanOutline.docxNELDA URBINA - - Deliverable 2 – Strategic Plan Outline
I have attached comments on your assignment below:
Please note: I have highlighted (in yellow) grading comments below on the Grading Rubric to match above comments, which you can redo and resubmit your assignment to improve your points for the assignment. Note: I noticed you had a few grammar errors such as; repetitive and overused words. My suggestion, please go to: grammarly.com/edu/setup using your Rasmussen student email and you can open a new account. Grammarly is a tool you can use which will assist you with any grammar or spelling errors within your written assignment. If you need an Access Code, please call the Personal Support Center at: 1-866-693-2211. Great job on week 2 assignment. You did a great job in discussing your strategic plans for domestic and international. I noticed you had a lot grammar errors, and I have attached a screenshot below for your review. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns. Thanks!
Grading Rubric
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No identification of successful domestic and international sourcing plans, missing basic features and support. |
Identifies successful domestic and international sourcing plans, but lacks explanation of basic features. |
Identifies successful domestic and international sourcing plans with a developed explanation. |
Thoroughly identifies successful domestic and international sourcing plans, fully explains basic features and supports stance. |
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No differentiation between successful domestic and international sourcing plans, student most closely identifies with. |
States differentiation between successful domestic and international sourcing plans, but lacks explanation and personal examples. |
States differentiation between successful domestic and international sourcing plans including explanation and personal examples. |
Thoroughly states differentiation between successful domestic and international sourcing plans with fully supporting personal examples and explanation. |
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No noticeable attempt to define what entails a successful sourcing plan. |
Correctly attempts to define what entails aspects of a successful sourcing plan with one statement of support. |
Correctly defines what entails aspects of a successful sourcing plan with adequate supporting research. |
Correctly defines what entails aspects of a successful sourcing plan with supporting research. |
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No noticeable attempt to differentiate domestic and international sourcing plans. |
Attempts differentiate domestic and international sourcing plans with little supporting evidence. |
Attempts to differentiate domestic and international sourcing plans with adequate supporting evidence. |
Thoroughly differentiate domestic and international sourcing plans with strong supporting evidence. |
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No identification of how an Emerging Leader will implement successful sourcing plans. |
Attempts to define how an Emerging Leader will implement successful sourcing plans with minimal supporting information. |
Defines how an Emerging Leader will implement successful sourcing plans with supporting information. |
Defines how an Emerging Leader will implement successful sourcing plans with strong supporting evidence and information. |
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No development of an Emerging Leader sourcing plan table outline. |
Development of an Emerging Leader sourcing plan table outline, but lacks explanation and leadership examples. |
Development of an Emerging Leader sourcing plan table outline with supporting explanations and leadership examples. |
Development of Emerging Leader sourcing plan table outline with fully supported thorough explanation and leadership examples. |
Screen shot below of grammar errors shown in Grammarly:
