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Assignment Cycle #1: Writing Prompt
A Place to Eat
Everyone, it seems, has a favorite place to eat. For some, it is a fast-food restaurant like McDonald's, Burger King or Taco Bell. Or it may be a diner like Denny's or an ethnic restaurant like El Torito, Panda Inn, or Olive Garden. It may be a restaurant that serves large portions, like Hometown Buffet or Claim-Jumpers, or that serves specialized food like Red Lobster or Ruth's Chris Steak House. It may be a fancy restaurant like l'Orange or a small, independently-owned café. It may be a place such as Benihana's known for its atmosphere, or it may be eating at home or a friend or relative's house. We like these places for many reasons including the type of food served, the decorations and setting, the atmosphere, the music or entertainment available, or even the price of the food.
Please discuss your favorite place to eat. Be sure to describe the location and explain why you enjoy eating there. Use examples and details to support your reasons.
My favorite Place to Eat
Recently, I have been tried out dishes from other countries that are offered in restaurants. The decision on which restaurant i should try out is mainly based on by my mood and the first idea of the place. From the past experiences I have been to various restaurants, I settled on Japanese restaurants as my favorite restaurant because of the good experience. I got this experience from a Japanese restaurant that became my best because I left the place feeling calm and happy because the quality of the meal I had and how tasty it was at the Shin-Sen-Gumi Hakata Ramen. The restaurant is kind of Tokyo style. It has a warm and inviting feel. Its interior is full of strong Japanese decoration. Comment by Zeena Alchokhachi: Capitalize Comment by Zeena Alchokhachi: Your thesis should not just summarize what the restaurant looks like. But it should answer why this is your favorite place to eat.
Shin-Sen-Gumi Hakata Ramen offers Japanese cuisine which is one of the most famous cuisines both in Japan and other countries. In the restaurant there is a wide variety of foods with most of the cuisines on the menu being cooked by the nature of most Japanese dishes. Japanese food is the origin of world known foods such as ramen and sushi. From the menu I decided to have some Vegetable Salad, Salad made up of meat, vegetables and olive. The food had traditional Japanese flavors and I also loved the friendly and respectful waiters who were serving the food. This makes me continue to have for Japanese restaurants and foods. I can say this restaurant as the most outstanding and delicious food. Even though the restaurants did not have any entertainment other than the Japanese style music that was calmly playing in the background the food experience was good enough to satisfy even the need for any entertainment. The interior of the restaurant is characterized by a quiet atmosphere, the lights are clear and not dazzling, and the chairs are very comfortable. Comment by Zeena Alchokhachi: Your topic sentence says this restaurant is amazing because the food is the most famous, but the support goes off topic and starts talking about how the restaurant did not have music and the interior design if the restaurant. Avoid going off topic.
After my first visit I have made several visits to the restaurant again and in my second visit, enjoyed a meal of miso soup with sushi box as my meal. Although this is very common for other restaurants, but the food taste is very good, so I am making Shin-Sen-Gumi Hakata as my favorite restaurant. After the miso soup I had the Chicken salad that I really enjoyed. Due to my love for the restaurant I have introduced some of my friends and asked for suggestions from people who have tried Japanese dishes before. After several visits to the restaurant I have decided my favorite meals are Spicy beef ramen with grilled chicken or taste a lot of different sushi rolls. Comment by Zeena Alchokhachi: This paragraph is a summary of what it was like when you want again, but its not answering why this is your favorite food or favorite place to eat. Comment by Zeena Alchokhachi: repetitive Comment by Zeena Alchokhachi: repetitive
The restaurant has enabled me to try more dishes that I would not have thought of trying before such as sashimi. They are providing the original taste of the food. These meals are offered coupled up with the drink of choice. I made most of my visits to the restaurant during summer when very hot. my favorite drink is lemon juice with some mint. I have grown to love the Shin-Sen-Gumi Hakata Ramen restaurant due to the atmosphere it provides and the welcoming nature of the waiters.
