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Discourse Analysis
1) Mushroom Model Analysis
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Vocabulary · Speech is casual amongst coworkers as well as customers (preferably friendly) · Still professional tone because in a work setting · Use technical terms such as “Pony”, “STAR”, “TPP”, “BORE”, etc.
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Behavior · Interactions with customers are laidback, where many will help customers whenever they ask · Taking initiative as employees to go above and beyond · Because of its casual nature, some employees find it an opportunity to ‘slack off’ |
Dress-Code · All employees are dressed in whatever style they prefer · Still uphold a dress code where we cannot wear open-toed shoes, thin-strap tank tops, no excess exposure · All employees are required to wear a H&M lanyard and their name tags |
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· Because it’s a retail job, the company emphasizes that we make the customers comfortable, therefore being casual is the best method especially since it is applicable to different types of customers · As much as being casual and friendly, we still must uphold a level of professionalism because after all we are representing H&M as a company; professional tone should reflect H&M’s values and need to satisfy customer needs · Many of H&M’s technical terms are derived from Swedish, thus translating into English which may be too long to say every time; alternative is to have acronyms which also helps fasten processes = efficiency |
· Our managers have emphasized that we as employees shouldn’t overwhelm customers when they come in, but rather be like ‘ninjas’ and appear/disappear whenever customers need us. This gives customer the opportunity to browse on their own. · One of H&M’s values is to have ‘entrepreneurial spirit’ where we make decisions on our own and take initiative to better our store · Our store has a low-retention rate because of certain employees that do not fully follow the values of the company, making their experience difficult to catch up with therefore leading to slacking off and committing ‘time fraud’ where they are dishonest about time (time they clock in, duration of breaks, etc) |
· Laws reinforce that employers must hire employees without any sort of bias or discrimination. But the company already believes in individuality, hence why there are diverse styles among my coworkers. · Although all styles are appreciated at H&M, we must uphold a certain amount of professionalism while working which is why a dress code is also implemented; not only does it enforce appropriate clothing but also work-safe attire (ex. Shoes) · We are all identified by lanyards and name tags, so we can maintain our individual styles even during work |
Discourse
Analysis
1)
Mushroom
Model
Analysis
Vocabulary
·
Speech
is
casual
amongst
coworkers
as
well
as
customers
(preferably
friendly)
·
Still
professional
tone
because
in
a
work
setting
·
Use
technical
terms
such
as
“
Pony
”
,
“
STAR
”
,
“
TPP
”
,
“
BORE
”
,
etc.
Behavior
·
Interactions
with
customers
are
laidback,
where
many
will
help
customers
whenever
they
ask
·
Taking
initiative
as
employees
to
go
above
and
beyond
·
Because
of
its
casual
nature,
some
employees
find
it
an
opportunity
to
‘
slack
off
’
Dress-Code
·
All
employees
are
dressed
in
whatever
style
they
prefer
·
Still
uphold
a
dress
code
where
we
cannot
wear
open-toed
shoes,
thin-
strap
tank
tops,
no
excess
exposure
·
All
employees
are
required
to
wear
a
H&M
lanyard
and
their
name
tags
·
Because
it
’
s
a
retail
job,
the
company
emphasizes
that
we
make
the
customers
comfortable,
therefore
being
casual
is
the
best
method
especially
since
it
is
applicable
to
different
types
of
customers
·
As
much
as
being
casual
and
friendly,
we
still
must
uphold
a
level
of
professionalism
because
after
all
we
are
representing
H&M
as
a
company;
professional
tone
should
reflect
H&M
’
s
values
and
need
to
satisfy
customer
needs
·
Many
of
H&M
’
s
technical
terms
are
derived
from
Swedish,
thus
translating
into
English
which
may
be
too
long
to
say
every
time;
alternative
is
to
have
acronyms
which
also
helps
fasten
processes
=
efficiency
·
Our
managers
have
emphasized
that
we
as
employees
shouldn
’
t
overwhelm
customers
when
they
come
in,
but
rather
be
like
‘
ninjas
’
and
appear/disappear
whenever
customers
need
us.
This
gives
customer
the
opportunity
to
browse
on
their
own.
·
One
of
H&M
’
s
values
is
to
have
‘
entrepreneurial
spirit
’
where
we
make
decisions
on
our
own
and
take
initiative
to
better
our
store
·
Our
store
has
a
low-retention
rate
because
of
certain
employees
that
do
not
fully
follow
the
values
of
the
company,
making
their
experience
difficult
to
catch
up
with
therefore
leading
to
slacking
off
and
committing
‘
time
fraud
’
where
they
are
dishonest
about
time
(time
they
clock
in,
duration
of
breaks,
etc)
·
Laws
reinforce
that
employers
must
hire
employees
without
any
sort
of
bias
or
discrimination.
But
the
company
already
believes
in
individuality,
hence
why
there
are
diverse
styles
among
my
coworkers.
·
Although
all
styles
are
appreciated
at
H&M,
we
must
uphold
a
certain
amount
of
professionalism
while
working
which
is
why
a
dress
code
is
also
implemented;
not
only
does
it
enforce
appropriate
clothing
but
also
work-safe
attire
(ex.
Shoes)
·
We
are
all
identified
by
lanyards
and
name
tags,
so
we
can
maintain
our
individual
styles
even
during
work