brief
Common Brief mistakes
Format Correct technique Bold masthead Yes, bold it
Line under masthead Yes, put a line under
Motivation Sentence Use 2nd person pronoun—Only
Subhead spacing 2 spaces above & 1 below
Flush left bullets Don’t indent bullet. Indent text from bullet
Tables Correct technique Title missing Got to have one
Title size too small not bolded 18-pt type Bold
Prepositions used No prepositions in table
Text flush left & indented Indent slightly. All text flush left from indent.
Space above and below text in cells Add space
Writing Correct technique
Too complex writing 1 preposition and/or conjunction per sentence
Empty, stilted phrases Don’t use “Per your request;” “In order to”
Word variety Don’t repeat words within sentence or paragraph
Paragraph structure One idea per paragraph
Product/Service Brief Correct technique
Demographics missing Sex, age, income, occupation, education, place of residence, race, national origin. Need 3
Psychographics listed not demographics Don’t report: Opinions, recreation, skills, activities
Motivation to Purchase missing Need 2
Demographics and/or Motivation to Purchase not bulleted Use bullets
Less than four market competitors Got to have 4
Less than three analytic factors Got to have 3
Dale Carnegie Brief Correct technique What to write about Explain both techniques work
What else to write about Give 2 real-world examples for each technique; total = 4