Module 2 Assignment Summary & Analysis of Nurse Manager Interview

Please see below my comments for some sections of your paper. In academic writing, you should avoid using the first person (I, me, we, us, you). This time, you do not have to change it, but please keep in mind for future papers.

You must use the APA 7th edition paper template for setting up your paper. Your paper does not follow APA 7th edition guidelines. Please refer to the template I provided or your APA handbook.

Plagiarizing work from another student is grounds for dismissal from the program. I understand this may be something new to students, therefore, I give all students a chance to resubmit. Copying word for word from another student is plagiarism. Please use your original thoughts and avoid the temptation to look at other students’ papers.

Once you re-submit your paper, please let me know and I will update your grade.

See comments below:

From another paper:

From your paper:

As you can see from the example, you used “the interview responded promptly” vs. “the interview answered directly and indirectly” – also, “he found simple” vs. “without hesitating” and “while others proved difficult” vs. “while others required some time.” – basically, they are the same thoughts all you did was changed words – that is plagiarizing.

Your paragraph:

The above highlighted sentence was submitted by another student to HotChalk (please see similarity report). – copying verbatim from another student’s paper is plagiarism.

Your paragraph:

Once again, this sentence was copied verbatim (word by word) from another students’ paper (see similarity report) – that is considered plagiarism.

Your paragraph:

From the similarity report, you copied this from another source. Please see below.

Whenever you state “according to,” you must follow that with a citation. Example: According to the World Health Organization (WHO, 2022)…..

Besides, your sentence is copied word by word from another student’s paper. That is considered plagiarism and against university policy.

Other problem/issues with your paper:

· You must have an introductory paper (please refer to PowerPoint under assignment 1)

· All Level II headings must be centered (please refer to APA 7th edition)

· Your paper must have a Conclusion paragraph (please refer to the PowerPoint presentation)

· Must use sources no older than 5 years (please refer to rubric)

· Must NOT include an abstract – it is not required, please refer to PowerPoint under assignment 1)