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For this first CLA, you will put into practice what you have learned so far: drafting, writing, revising, editing, and improving a piece of written text. To do this, you will analyze the rough draft, intermediate draft, and final draft of student Mike Boyle .Then, answer the following questions:

1. How does Mike's intermediate draft compare and contrast with the first draft? What changes did he make?

2. How does Mike's final draft compare and contrast with his intermediate draft? What changes did he make? How has he improved the level of detail in his final draft compared to his intermediate draft? How has he improved the structure of his paragraphs in his final draft? Where has he eliminated unnecessary words and sentences? How has he corrected grammatical errors?