Writing Memo Assignment
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MemoFeedback.docxinsufficiently ensured the memo is clear and brief.
Feedback:
How might you shorten this a bit to make it more readable? Maybe use some bullet points. Your assignment must follow these formatting requirements: ¿ Be typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides; citations and references must follow APA or school-specific format. How might you have composed a memo that is a single page long, double-spaced?
My draft score for this part: 18/20
Thoroughly chose language to match the purpose and tone for the situation and audience.
Satisfactorily formatted the memo accurately and according to the details in the textbook.
Feedback:
Please repair the capitalization in the subject line. See http://www.businesswritingblog.com/business_writing/2010/02/words-to-capitalize-in-titles-and-headings.html for more information.
Satisfactorily created an effective opening that establishes goodwill without obscuring the message.
Feedback:
This is a good start! How might you have provided a further greeting to soften the blow?
3-4 errors present
Feedback:
Please proofread carefully. Use Grammarly for every assignment.
