Memo Writing

memoassignment.edited.docx by Rohim Dhaubhadel

Submission date: 26-Sep-2018 09:23PM (UTC-0500) Submission ID: 1009153277 File name: memoassignment.edited.docx Word count: 326 Character count: 1676

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7% SIMILARITY INDEX

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7% STUDENT PAPERS

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memoassignment.edited.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

Submitted to North Lake College Student Paper

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FINAL GRADE

70/100 memoassignment.edited.docx GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

PAGE 1

Comment 1

this seems kind of nonchalant --- don't use slang terms in a business memo

AWK Awkward sentence structure. Revise f or clarity and better readability.

AWK Awkward sentence structure. Revise f or clarity and better readability.

Comment 2

this is not appropriate

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Comment 4

boost

AWK Awkward sentence structure. Revise f or clarity and better readability.

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Comment 6

let the employees know why you have to discontinue this practice. you are paying f or this out of your personal f unds; can no longer obtain the number of turkeys you need f rom local groceries, and the cost of supply this f or 250 employees is f inancially taxing. You need to let them know why or employees will be upset.

also, state to them to enjoy the holidays with f amily and f riends and be thankf ul f or all we have.

RUBRIC: PROPOSAL MEMO GRADING RUBRIC

FORMATTING

POOR (5)

FAIR (15)

GOOD (25)

EXCELLENT (30)

BODY/CONTENT

POOR (10)

FAIR (35)

GOOD (45)

EXCELLENT (50)

GRAMMAR/STYLE

POOR (0)

FAIR (7)

GOOD (8)

EXCELLENT (10)

PERSUASION

0 / 100

0 / 30

The letter introduction is missing 3 or more components.

The letter introduction is missing 2 of the components.

The letter introduction is missing 1 of the components.

The letter introduction includes all components: the reason f or writ ing.

0 / 50

The student unclearly supports his or her reason f or writ ing, the inf ormation requested, identif ied yourself , project you are working on, why inf ormation is needed, how you f ound out about the organization or agency.

The student somewhat unclearly supports his or her reason f or writ ing, the inf ormation requested, identif ied yourself , project you are working on, why inf ormation is needed, how you f ound out about the organization or agency.

The student somewhat clearly supports his or her the reason f or writ ing, the inf ormation requested, identif ied yourself , project you are working on, why inf ormation is needed, how you f ound out about the organization or agency.

The student clearly supports his or her the reason f or writ ing, the inf ormation requested, identif ied yourself , project you are working on, why inf ormation is needed, how you f ound out about the organization or agency.

0 / 10

The letter exceeds 5 spelling and/or grammar errors.

The letter contains between 1-4 spelling and/or grammar errors.

The letter contains no more than 2 spelling and/or grammar errors.

The letter contains no spelling and/or grammar errors.

0 / 10

POOR (0)

FAIR (7)

GOOD (8)

EXCELLENT (10)

Letter is missing 2 or more f ormatting components and/or all components are completed incorrectly.

Letter is missing 2 components and/or most components are completed incorrectly.

Letter is missing 1 of the components and/or some components are completed incorrectly.

Letter includes f ormatting components f or a letter: date, salutation, closing, signature and are completed correctly.