business proposal

Have you sat down with a tutor for this? I’d like you to be sure to do some careful proofreading because

there are a lot of mistakes and several lengthy paragraphs.

To develop the context of the report, you want to consider who you are and who you’re writing to. Who

would want to know this information? Be sure to more clearly state your purpose for writing in the very

beginning.

If you’re suggesting MacDonald’s in NYC, you’re going to need to get more specific with the

neighborhood. The city is too big. In doing this, you’ll include some analytics on the demographics of the

area. There is quite a bit more research to be done here.

The last thing I want you to do here is add a section with instructions for how to start a MacDonald’s

franchise. What do we do now?