Thesis Proposal
Writing Strategies and Ethical Considerations
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Introduction
- Have an idea of the general structure of topics
- Structure depends on the design
- Be aware of good writing practices
- Anticipate ethical issues prior to the study
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Writing the Proposal
Arguments presented in a proposal:
- Consider early on in planning the study
The major points that need to be addressed
How they will convey a cohesive picture of the study
What the core arguments to advance are
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Arguments presented in a proposal:
- What do readers need to better understand the topic?
- What do readers need to know about the topic?
- What do you propose to study?
- What is the setting, and who are the people you will study?
- What methods do you plan to use to collect data?
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Arguments presented in a proposal:
- How will you analyze the data?
- How will you validate the findings?
- What ethical issues will your study present?
- What do preliminary results show about the practicability and value of the proposed study?
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Format for a quantitative proposal:
- Follow the format of a journal article
Introduction
A literature review
Methods
Results
Discussion
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Format for a mixed methods proposal:
- Purpose statement/research question for quantitative and qualitative components
- Include mixed methods
Rationale
Design elements
Visual diagram of procedures
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Designing the sections of a proposal:
- Specify the sections early in the design of a proposal
- Examine proposals that other students have authored under your advisor
- Look for a course on proposal development
- Review formats with your adviser
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Writing the Proposal
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Writing Ideas
- Read fiction and nonfiction widely
- Read good literature
- Always think about how the ideas writers share in their works might be applied in writing good research
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Writing as thinking:
- Write ideas down early in the process rather than talking about them
- Work through several drafts of a proposal rather than trying to polish the first draft
- Do not edit at the early draft stage
Start with an outline
Write a draft and shift and sort ideas
Finally, edit and polish each sentence
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The habit of writing:
- Make writing a daily activity
- Keep a daily chart of activities if you do not feel you have time to write
- Write when fresh
- Avoid binges
- Write in small, regular amounts
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The habit of writing:
- Schedule writing tasks
- Keep daily charts: time spent, page equivalents, percent complete
- Plan beyond daily goals
- Share your writing with supportive, constructive peers before going public
- Try to work on two or three writing projects concurrently so that you do not become overloaded with any one
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The habit of writing:
- Exercises to improve writing
Describe an object by its parts and dimensions
Write a conversation between two people
Write a set of directions for a complicated task
Take a subject and write about it three different ways
Choose a physical location for writing that is not a distraction
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Readability of the manuscript:
- Use consistent terms throughout the proposal
- Consider how different type of narrative thought guide the reader:
Umbrella thoughts – general or core ideas
Big thoughts in writing – specific ideas
Little thoughts – reinforcing big thoughts
Attention or interest thoughts – keep the reader on track, organize ideas
- Coherence in writing – ideas tie and logically flow
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Voice, tense, and “fat”:
- Eliminate unnecessary words
- Delete the passive voice
- Scale down qualifiers, eliminate overused phrases
- Reduce excessive quotations, italics, and parenthetical comments
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Voice, tense, and “fat”:
- Use active voice
“If the subject acts, the voice is active. If the subject is acted on, the voice is passive” (Ross-Larson, 1982, p. 29)
- Use strong active verbs
- Pay close attention to the tense of your verbs
- Edit and revise drafts of a manuscript to trim fat
- Write, review, edit
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Ethical Issues to Anticipate
- Research involves collecting data from people
- Researchers need to
Protect research participants
Develop trust with research participants
Promote the integrity of research
Guard against misconduct
Cope with new problems that emerge
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Prior to beginning the study:
- Consider codes of ethics
- Apply to the institutional review board
- Obtain the necessary permissions to gain access to the site and to study participants
- Select a site without vested interests
- Negotiate authorship for publication
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Ethical Issues to Anticipate
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Beginning the study:
- In the research problem:
Identify a problem that will benefit individuals being studied
- In the purpose and questions:
Convey the purpose and sponsors of the research to participants
- Do not pressure participants into signing consent forms, obtain informed consent from participants
- Respect norms and charters of indigenous cultures
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Collecting the data:
- Respect the site, and disrupt as little as possible
- Make sure all participants receive the benefits
- Avoid deceiving participants
- Respect potential power imbalances, consider reciprocity
- Avoid exploitation of participants
- Avoid collecting harmful information
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Analyzing the data:
- Avoid going native – taking sides or disregarding data
- Avoid disclosing only positive results – reflect the statistical tests and diversity of perspectives
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Analyzing the data:
- Respect the privacy of participants:
Protect anonymity of participants
Remove names from responses
Qualitative researchers use aliases and pseudonyms
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Reporting, sharing, and storing data:
- Do not falsify authorship, evidence, data, findings or conclusions
- Do not plagiarize
- Avoid disclosing information that would harm participants
- Communicate in clear straightforward, appropriate language
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Reporting, sharing, and storing data:
- Share data with others (e.g. stakeholders, participants)
- Keep raw data and other materials for a reasonable period of time
- Do not duplicate or piecemeal publications
- Complete proof of compliance with ethical issues and lack of conflict of interest
- Understand who owns the data
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Summary
- How to write a proposal
- Use one of the outlines for a qualitative, quantitative, or mixed methods proposal
- Importance of putting words on paper
- Consider anticipated ethical issues and describe
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