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Marisa Smith W3TD Draft Running Head: Response

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[Name of the Student]

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[Name of institution]

February 1, 2019

`Process of Photosynthesis

Definition:

The process that is defined here is, "Photosynthesis". It is

a process that is used by algae, plants, and bacteria for the

production of their food by using sunlight. As sunlight is

turned into chemical energy. It is a natural process that is

also used in the development of clean fuels. It is also a

source of renewable energy source. The green plants

captured the light energy that converts carbon dioxide and

water along with minerals into energy-rich organic

compounds and oxygen. It is an important process that

helps in the maintenance of life on earth. If this process

stopped than there is no food and organic material on this

planet.

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Functions of photosynthesis:

The process of photosynthesis energize the plant and also

gives it a green color. This is used by the plant for the

preparation of food. In this process, the plant uses sunlight

that is a trap in their leaves and gives the energy to plant.

The plant uses this energy and convert water and carbon

dioxide into sugar that is known as glucose (David O. Hall,

1999). This glucose provides energy to plants and also

made starch and cellulose. Starch is stored in different

parts of the plant that is later on used as food whole

cellulose help in the building of cell wall. Therefore, some

of the food that is consumed daily is packed with a

starch such as grains and rice.

The existence of this process:

This is a natural process that is not observed by the naked

eye but the presences of this process can be observed in

the plant. When the leaves of the plant are green it means

that the process of photosynthesis takes place but when the

green light is not reflected back then leaves look like red

and blue in winters. Due to the presences of chlorophyll in

plants the solar energy is absorbed that turn into chemical

reaction and production of food takes place. It is not

necessary that all energy that comes from a plant is

observed but due to presences of different colors light

sometimes the green light absorbed that makes the plant

cell red and yellowish in winters. This yellow, red and blue

color is due to lack of chlorophyll in the plant (Petersen,

2008). Therefore, when the chlorophyll is gone green light

is not being reflected that makes the color of leaves

different.

Figure: Process of Photosynthesis (Petersen, 2008).

Photosynthesis process:

The process of photosynthesis is divided into different

types. One requires sunlight but the other one do not

require sunlight. Both of this reaction of photosynthesis

takes place in the chloroplasts. The light-dependent

reaction takes place in thylakoid whole the light-

independent reaction takes place in the stoma.

The interest of the reader in this process:

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Photosynthesis is a natural phenomenon but it is also an

interesting topic that how food is produced in plant

and why pants always look green in spring and yellow or

red in fall. All these questions make this process an

interesting topic that need to be discussed . So that,

every one of us can get to know about the food that is

consumed in our daily routine.

References

David O. Hall, K. R. (1999). Photosynthesis . Cambridge

University Press.

Petersen, C. (2008). Plants Need Sunlight. Cherry Lak.

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