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Marisa Smith W2IM draft LATE 21h Running Head: Response

Response

By:

Marisa Smith

January 28, 2019

Introduction:

A digital camera is a camera that is used to captured videos

and picture. Every camera is unique in its qualities and

features. The cameras of today are digital with or without

interchangeable lenses. However, high end, high definition

camera are mostly used by professionals but other people

also use it as per their interest. The digital camera of today

has different features that display the picture or video on

the screen immediately after being recorded. These images

are then stored in the memory that is transferred to portable

devices. So that, these images can be stored in multiple

ways. Moreover, the features of digital camera varies from

model to model and also from company to company. Some

cameras can crop, stitch and edit the pictures at the same

time.

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The camera that is discussed in this paper is

"Interchangeable lens digital HD video camera recorder" of

SONY. This company is considered as a well – reputed in

producing high quality digital camera. The high

technological features of this camera makes it is desirable

for the people due to its high quality videos and pictures

(Lindblom, 2016). This camera can be used in multiple

ways depend on its usage. It can either be used for

capturing photos or recording a video. The interchangeable

lens features of this camera makes is desirable for

professional photographers. Before using this camera there

are number of steps are followed properly so that this

camera can get operational (Adorama.com, 2018).

Important components of camera and its definitions:

List of parts of camera

Images of these parts.

AC adaptor / charger:

It is a type of external power supply that gives power to the

camera.

Power cord:

It is an electric cable that transfer power from switch to

battery for charging.

Rechargeable battery pack:

It an extra battery with the camera so that it can be

changed with the other one.

Wireless remote commander:

It is helps to control the camera from distant places.

(pro.sony, 2018)

Component video cable:

This cable is a combination of both audio and video cable

that transfer video and audio separately.

A/V connecting cable:

It is a type of electric connector that is used to carry both

audio and video signals. The one end connected with the

camera and the other one with laptop or computer.

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Overused word: Important 2

[the camera]

[the camera or a camera]

Passive voice

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USB cable:

It is used to transfer data from USB to desired computer

or laptop.

USB Adaptor cable:

It is a connector between the USB and the camera so that

data can be transferred .

Large LCD viewfinder:

This large LCD viewfinder is used to focus and frame the

desired picture. The one end of this side is pressed against

the face.

Large eyecup:

It is a small oval cup with a rim that is curved in shape so

that it can fit to the orbit of the eye. Hence, it is helpful in

taking right shot.

Wind Screen/ microscope:

Windscreen is used to set the camera lens so that

complete image can be taken .

Handle:

It is used to put the camera on stand .

Grip:

This grip help in holding multiple batteries. It also helps

in shooting a portrait photography.

Flash Memory unit jack cover:

It is used for the storage of flash so that it can be

protected from any damage.

Body cap ;

It used in covering the lens of camera .

Zoom lens:

It is portable or changeable lens that is used according

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Possibly confused word

[a laptop]

[a desired or the desired]

Passive voice

[to] 11

[the right]

[The windscreen or A windscreen] 13

Passive voice

[a stand or the stand]

[help helps]→ 16

[ a portrait]

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to the type of image.

Lens hood:

It is also known as lens shade that is used in front of

lens that save it from the shade of sun so that it can

prevent lens glare and lens flare. It also save the lens

from scratches.

Front lens cap:

It is used to cover the lens.

Form the above mentioned components it is cleared that

there are multiple components of this video camera that

should be properly assembled . So that, this it is

important to properly follow the steps . Below mentioned

is the detail of every step .

Step 1: Checking the supplied accessories.

Firstly, all the supplied accessories of this camera must be

properly checked before its assembly. In the component

section of this document the list of camera accessories is

added. Thus, it is important to check all these items.

Step 2: Attaching the supplied accessories

The attachment of lens will be done at the end.

Separate lens for this camera are available that anyone

can buy as per their choice.

Step 3: Attaching the handle

As per the direction of the arrow that is shown in the image

below slide the handle into the accessory shoe.

Figure: Handle of camcorder . (anon-asia.com, 2018)

Step 4:

Then press the screw down in the clockwise direction for

fasten the handle.

Figure: Fixation of handle (anon-asia.com, 2018)

Step 5:

Different type of microphone can block the light to the

lens. If you are facing such problem than the handle can be

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[a camera or the camera]

[a portable or the portable] 21

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Passive voice 23

Passive voice 24

[the lens or a lens] 25

Repetitive word: shade 26

Repetitive word: save 27

[save saves]→ 28

Repetitive word: lens

[above mentioned above-mentioned]→ 30

Wordiness 31

Passive voice 32

Overused word: properly 33

Split infinitive

Repetitive word: step

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[document ], 37

Overused word: important

[the lens] 39

Passive voice 40

[are is]→

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fixed towards the other way round. This can be done by

removing the cap and screw of the handle slide bar. Thus, it

will pull out the handle slide bar.

Figure: Microphone (anon-asia.com, 2018)

Step 6:

Reattach the microphone with the holder of the

microphone's face is to the other side. Insert the

microphone bar from opposite direction on the microphone

bar.

Figure: Reattach the microphone (anon-asia.com, 2018)

Step 7:

Then insert the handle slide of the bar from opposite

side as it can also replace the screw and cap.

Figure: Attaching the microphone (pro.sony, 2018)

Step 8:

With the attached handle attach microphone with it.

Figure: Attachment of handle with microphone. (pro.sony,

2018)

Step 9:

The supplied microphone at point A will be attached with

point B.

After that place the microphone that is at position A in

the holder of microphone at position C. the model

name will be facing in the upward direction. Then, close

the cover and also shut the clamp.

Connect the microscope plug with the INPUT 1 at jack

D. Fix the cable of micropho ne into the clamp cable.

Figure: Cable clamp . (pro.sony , 2018)

Step 10: Attaching the grip

Align the grip at position 1 and also locate the camcorder

with the help of boss of the grip and screw. By choosing

the angle of grip fasten it with turning knob at point 2

in clockwise direction.

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[the camcorder or a camcorder]

[fasten fastening]→

[of off]→ 44

[the opposite]

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Figure: Attachment of Grip

Step 11: Connect the cable to the remote jack:

By connecting the remote with the grip the recording can

be started and ended by merely pressing the button on the

grip .

Figure: connection of cable with remote jack. (pro.sony,

2018)

Step 12: Attaching the large LCD viewfinder with camera.

As shown in the picture mentioned below, attach the view

finder with the LCD screen.

Figure: LCD screen. (pro.sony , 2018)

Moreover, there are two ways through which the view

finder can be used .

Figure: Different uses of LCD screen. (pro.sony, 2018)

Step 13: Adjusting the view finder lens

The lens ring can be turn as per the requirement of the

video maker. Hence, the image will be visible on the LCD

screen. Keep adjusting the lens through the ring until the

picture become clear.

Figure: Adjustment of lens ring.

Step 14: Attaching the large eyecup

In any case, if the image on the large LCD is not clear than

large eyecup can be used. In order to attach it with the lens

stretch it slightly. Than align it with the groove in the large

LCD view finder.

Figure: Eyecup.

Step 15: Using the LCD screen

The LCD screen is placed above the centerline of the lens.

It is placed at the same angle as the lens lies to view the

subject. The LCD screen can be rotated right and left.

Hence, it allow the person other than the camera man to see

the image.

Figure: Rotation of LCD screen.

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Repetitive word: microphone 47

[the microphone or a microphone]

[jack Jack]→ 49

[the microphone]

[clamp Clamp]→ 51

[. sony]

Repetitive word: grip 53

[to fasten] 54

[the knob] 55

[a clockwise or the clockwise]

[grip ],

Repetitive word: grip

[. sony]

Passive voice

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Step 16: Use of LCD hold dial

The LCD screen angle can be adjusted by turning the

LCD hold dial. It can be done by loosen the LCD hold

dial in order to change the angle .

Figure: LCD hold dial.

Step 17: charging the battery pack

The battery of the camera is directly charged with the AC

charger.

Figure: Battery Pack (Lindblom, 2016)

At point 1, the mode switch is set to charge.

At point 2, the adapter is connected with the power code.

At point 3, the power cord main leads connects with the

wall socket.

At point 4, the battery pack is placed at the slot of AC.

Press it down and the slide it in the direction of the arrow

as shown.

Step 18: After charging the battery

When the charger lamp is off the battery is fully charged.

But still if you want to charge the batter for one more hour

than the battery can be used for longer time period. Once

the charger is completed remove it from the adaptor.

Step 19: Attach it with battery pack

Press the battery at the back of camcorder and also slide it

right. In this way the battery is fixed in camcorder .

Figure: Attachment of Battery pack (Lindblom, 2016)

Step 20: Outside power source can also be used

The camcorder can also be used on the AC power by

connecting it will the code DK 415. Thus, in thus way the

camcorder can be used for longer time period without

worrying about the battery.

Figure: outside power source (anon-asia.com, 2018)

At the point 1, the power code is connected with the

AC adaptor.

At point 2, connect the main leads of power cord with the

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[the lens]

Passive voice 62

[loosen loosening]→ 63

[in order to to]→ 64

Repetitive word: angle

Passive voice

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wall socket.

At point 3, connect the cord of DK 415 with AC adaptor.

At point 4, set the switch of the AC adaptor.

At point 5, in the direction of the arrow connect the cord

with the camcorder battery.

Step 21: Attaching the lens.

The lens of camcorder must be changed away from any

dusty place. So that any debris and dust cannot stuck

with the lens.

Step 22

Remove the packaging lid and body cap from the

camcorder body from the rear of the lens.

Step 23

The lens is mounted by aligning.

Figure: Mounting of lens . (anon-asia.com, 2018)

Step 24

Push the lens towards the camcorder body. Then turn the

lens clockwise until it get locked.

Figure: Mounting indexes (Adorama.com, 2018)

Step 25: Removing the lens

For removing the lens, press the lens releasing button and

turn the lens in clockwise direction until it stops.

Figure: Fixation of lens .

Step 26: Replacing of packaging lid

Body cap marks must be align on the top of mounting

indexes and turn the cap in clockwise direction. Align the

red line on the lens hood. Then turn the lens in clockwise

direction until the red dots and line get align.

Step 27: Turning on the camcorder and setting the time and

date

Turning on the camcorder:

By pressing the green button the camera will be on.

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Passive voice

[connects connect]→

Passive voice

[way ], 70

[the camcorder or a camcorder]

[an outside]

[the point] 73

Passive voice

Passive voice 75

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[. So so]→ 77

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Figure: Tuning of camcorder. (Lindblom, 2016)

Step 28: inserting a memory card

Open the cover at the bottom of camera as shown by the

arrow.

Figure: Memory card slot. (Lindblom, 2016)

Insert the card in the notched edge.

In this way the assembling of new camcorder is

finished. After this, it is ready for use.

References

Adorama.com. (2018, 2 9). Best 4K Video Cameras.

Retrieved from Adorama.com:

https://www.adorama.com/alc/best-4k-video-cameras

anon-asia.com. (2018, 1 1). Knowing the Different Parts of

the Camera. Retrieved from anon-asia.com:

https://snapshot.canon-asia.com/article/en/lesson-2-

knowing-the-different-parts-of-the-camera

Lindblom, O. (2016, 3 16). Interchangeable-Lens Camera .

Retrieved from videomaker.com:

https://www.videomaker.com/article/b02/18425-

interchangeable-lens-camera-buyer-s-guide

pro.sony. (2018, 1 1). Camcorders. Retrieved from

pro.sony: https://pro.sony/en_AL/products/camcorders

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[the lens or a lens]

[get gets]→

[a clockwise or the clockwise]

[the lens or a lens]

[be align be aligned]→ 84

[a clockwise or the clockwise]

[a clockwise or the clockwise] 86

[ and],

stuck be stuck→

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Unusual word pair 88

[way ], 89

[the new or a new]