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Under the calm and quiet night, I am walking next to the river and passing through the cool wind with my best friend Yoky, it’s the best time of daily life. After a mile of walking, he started to get tired and hesitate to walk anymore. We used to walk at least four-miles beside from the river. I can see my best friend is getting old, and the time for the farewell is not very far. I had to hold him and come back home. I put him on the bed and let him sleep. I moved my spot to the desk and opened a thick dictionary.

When I was a little kid, I used to be raised up by my grandma. My grandma’s house was in a small quiet town, so I could have a chance to play and to observe all kinds of wild animals and insects. Every morning, Yoky wakes me up to have breakfast together, and after breakfast, our exploration begins. I go to the backyard and say “hi” to grandma’s livestock, pigs, cows, and chickens. They all seem to starve, and I hurry to feed them. After all the work is done, finally the exciting part starts. I pick up my gears and change my shoes to prepare myself. Yoky and I enter the mountain right behind from the house.

A high blue sky, clear air and the chirping sounds of birds, welcome us for the adventure. Our first mission is catching a dragonfly. Yoky finds one, we walk noiselessly to it. I swing my butterfly net. I missed it. I can see Yoky is disappointed on me, then he walk in front of me to seek the next target. He found another one, the beautiful yellow butterfly, sitting on an unknown wildflower. It was my last chance to make Yoki trust me back. I, again, walk noiselessly and concentrated all my nerves on my hands. I swing. The butterfly struggling inside of the net, and I rapidly and quickly put it into the container. I tried not to hurt it and it going to be updated to my photobook.

We decided to explore more, but suddenly I had a bad hunch. I ignored but I my hunch was right. A dog is dying inside of owner’s chest. It seems like the dog was hit by a bike. It was a huge healthy dog, but he was dying that easily. Obviously, the owner didn’t expect that to happen. I just realized life could vanish that easily, and it could happen to me too. Yoky set down, shivered and cried miserably. I picked up him and run back to home. I didn’t even look back. I was so scared of the sad reality. Although we came back home, Yoki didn’t want to leave from me.

If I had enough knowledge to help the animals, I could’ve helped the dog and the owner. If I was brave enough to do something, the owner didn’t have the leave the dog that miserably. I was terrified but I had strong will at the same time. I decided to study and research harder to help and to know more about life and animal. I was confident about it because not like others I have more experience than others. My life was full of unique experience with different creatures.

Now I’m sitting on the chair looking at Yoky falling asleep. He seems tired and pulls his tough out. Maybe he doesn’t even have the energy to put it inside. I turn my body toward the desk and open my notebook and the textbook. It’s time to study again for my goal. Also, I just wish I can have more time with Yoky.