Preliminary Care Coordination Plan

Thank you for your work on this assessment.  

I made some recommendations on your scoring guide on what is needed for a higher performance score.  I look forward to reading more of your work.  

All my best, 

Dr. Elina

RUBRICS

CRITERIA 1

Analyze a health concern and the associated best practices for health improvement.COMPETENCY

Adapt care based on patient-centered and person-focused factors.

NON_PERFORMANCEDoes not analyze a health concern and the associated best practices for health improvement.BASICAttempts to analyze a health concern and the associated best practices for health improvement.PROFICIENTAnalyzes a health concern and the associated best practices for health improvement.DISTINGUISHEDProvides a perceptive analysis of a health concern and the associated best practices for health improvement. Provides credible evidence for best practices and articulates underlying assumptions and points of uncertainty in the analysis.

COMMENTS:

I am glad you analyzed a health concern of trauma and identified a best practice. For a distinguished score, evidence is needed to guide the best practices to improve future patient outcomes.  What does the literature say about this? You need to provide evidence to address this.

CRITERIA 2

Describe specific goals that should be established to address a selected health care problem.COMPETENCY

Collaborate with patients and family to achieve desired outcomes.

NON_PERFORMANCEDoes not describe specific goals that should be established to address a selected health care problem.BASICAttempts to describe undefined goals that should be established to address a selected health care problem.PROFICIENTDescribes specific goals that should be established to address a selected health care problem.DISTINGUISHEDDescribes specific goals that should be established to address a selected health care problem. Ensures that the goals are realistic, measurable, and attainable.

COMMENTS:

You did a fine job identifying undefined goals that should be established for a selected health care problem. To earn a distinguished score, please make sure your goals are realistic, measurable, and attainable.

CRITERIA 3

Identify available community resources for a safe and effective continuum of care.COMPETENCY

Create a satisfying patient experience.

NON_PERFORMANCEDoes not identify available community resources.BASICAttempts to identify available community resources.PROFICIENTIdentifies available community resources for a safe and effective continuum of care.DISTINGUISHEDIdentifies significant and available community resources for a safe and effective continuum of care. Provides a comprehensive list of resources, with credible evidence of their contribution toward improving community health.

COMMENTS:

I like that you identified available community resources. Please make sure you discuss how this relates to safe and effective continuum of care. To earn a distinguished mark, please provide a comprehensive list of resources and how each contributes to safe and effective continuum of care.

CRITERIA 4

Organize content so ideas flow logically with smooth transitions; contains few errors in grammar/punctuation, word choice, and spelling.COMPETENCY

Apply professional, scholarly communication strategies to lead patient-centered care.

NON_PERFORMANCEDoes not organize content for ideas. Lacks logical flow and smooth transitions.BASICOrganizes content with some logical flow and smooth transitions. Contains errors in grammar/punctuation, word choice, and spelling.PROFICIENTOrganizes content so ideas flow logically with smooth transitions; contains few errors in grammar/punctuation, word choice, and spelling.DISTINGUISHEDOrganizes content with a clear purpose. Content flows logically with smooth transitions using coherent paragraphs, correct grammar/punctuation, word choice, and free of spelling errors.

COMMENTS:

I like that your writing was very clear and logical.  You organized content with a clear purpose. Content flows logically with smooth transitions using coherent paragraphs, correct grammar/punctuation, word choice, and free of spelling errors. 

CRITERIA 5

Apply APA formatting to in-text citations and references, exhibiting nearly flawless adherence to APA format.COMPETENCY

Apply professional, scholarly communication strategies to lead patient-centered care.

NON_PERFORMANCEDoes not apply APA formatting to headings, in-text citations, and references. Does not use quotes or paraphrase correctly.BASICApplies APA formatting to in-text citations, headings and references incorrectly and/or inconsistently, detracting noticeably from the content. Inconsistently uses headings, quotes and/or paraphrasing.PROFICIENTApplies APA formatting to in-text citations and references, exhibiting nearly flawless adherence to APA format.DISTINGUISHEDExhibits strict and flawless adherence to APA formatting of headings, in-text citations, and references. Quotes and paraphrases correctly.

COMMENTS:

Your application of APA formatting was flawless. You used quotes and paraphrased appropriately.

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