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I am currently applying a graduate school, social program, and they put me on the wait list, I am trying my best to send love letter to admission to make sure they could get me an offer

What you need to do is:

1. Make language sounds native, some word and sentence are not native

2. Add sometime on based on my descriptions which fit American culture to increase the acceptance rate. （Think about if you are in this situation, what will you say, add it ）

Dear Admission Officer,

Greetings from Lee, who was placed on the waiting list of the program. I am writing to update my latest development and would also like to take this opportunity to express my strong interests in this program.

During this outbreak of novel coronavirus, our company XXX（ a social enterprise committed I founded aimed at reducing the waste of food and improving the dietary health of children in the poor neighborhood) made special contributions to the society. The management discussed the situation and agreed to donate 600 box that were originally planned to sell via online platform to the XXXX Seniors’ Home and the XXXXX County Elementary School. The boxes contained fresh, conventional produces (fruits and vegetables that we bought off the hands of farmers) and were expected to improve the food shortage or nutritious problems.

My deepest impression was a boy named Jack. He came from a low-income family and because of the epidemic and safety control measures, local schools called off teaching and the free lunch also stopped. It increased the daily spending of the boy’s family. Based on our close cooperation with local community and our appraisal, XXXX confirmed that Jack and his family were eligible to our plan, so we continuously delivered Box to help the family tide over.

Thanks to our contributions, XXXX had been cited as a ‘socially responsible enterprise’ by the local City Government. What made me especially proud was, that in times of the most critical, we embodied our social spirit through practice at work. I believe I am a strong candidate to XXXX program because just as its names suggests, Help4 -- helps 4 parties (the school, children, farmers, and government) and truly care about our society. The more successful you are, the greater the capacity for communal good, by what I am doing I feel strong motivation to succeed and use make our community/world a better place.

I sincerely hope that your admissions committee could give me a favorable reconsideration Should you have any questions please do not hesitate to contact me. Look forward to hearing from you. I think my future social success will also pay credits back to the glorious XXXX traditions.

Best regards,

Lee