Order 1633971: editing my paper on Karl Marx

Paper Rubric Paper Basics Earned Possible Pages 0 20 (7 to 10 = 20, 6 = 3, 5 or less = 0) only 5! Thesis 4 5 Follow thesis 5 10 (10 = yes, 5 = some, 0 = no) Do you follow your thesis, or just talk about how bad Stalin was to the USSR? Good arguments 3 5 (5 = yes, 3 = some, 0 = no) Research for arguments 3 5 (5 = yes, 3 = some, 0 = no) Summarizing conclusion 3 5 (5 = strong, 3 = there, 0 = none) Factually accurate 8 10 (10 = yes, 5 = some, 0 = no) 2 Correct interpretations 5 5 (5 = yes, 3 = some, 0 = no) Spelling/grammar 0 30 less than three per page Subtotal 31 95

Sources Earned Possible Number used in paper 35 50 five points each only 7! Subtotal 35 50

Bibliography Earned Possible Included in paper 5 5 Annotated 0 5 Chicago format 5 5 Subtotal 10 15

Footnotes Earned Possible Use footnotes 5 5 Numbered sequentially 5 5 Used all 10 sources 25 50 five points each only 5! Allman and McLellan not used Formatting errors 0 30 three points each 10+ Cite everything 45 50 five points each 1 Subtotal 80 140

Earned Possible TOTAL 156 300

Do you follow your thesis, or just talk about how bad Stalin was to the USSR?

only 5! Allman and McLellan not used