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Although Watkin mother specially try to make sure that she had access to the books as she knows that Watkin likes reading books but still there was an intense conflict in between them and Watkin was often threatened by her parents that they will burn her books if she does not fulfill the other expectations. They also were more probably seems to say that studying too much might lead her being insane and it was so discouraging to her and was negatively affecting her educational and academic goals. However, the uncertainty that parent of Watkin rooted in her was directly influencing the feeling of doubt and suspicions’ negatively affecting her overall personality. In addition to it regarding the career selection and education there are some parents who give their children a limited support at the time of decision making regarding the career choices along with their education. Comment by Kasinda C. Lang: Do you need “but” if you already have “Although”? And do you mean to say “Watkin’s mother”? And this sentence is a bit long, reread it and consider rephrasing/restructuring it. Comment by Kasinda C. Lang: Reread this. Comment by Kasinda C. Lang: Do you need this apostrophe?

It is the most crucial stage when a person is choosing his/her career and education as the entire future is dependent on it. It is the stage of life when the parents needs to be supportive and encouraging to their children in order to let them become more confident and polished individual. However, some parents do not understand that their limited support to children is making them weaker as they would not grow in a more specific way. Moreover, I have personally analyzed the situation of my class fellow he tends to be nervous at many times and get panic on small things. Comment by Kasinda C. Lang: Check this Comment by Kasinda C. Lang: Check this, do you need an article? Comment by Kasinda C. Lang: Check this.

I started sitting with him, and we made some conversations, so I got to know that his parent was not so encouraging to him and this was the primary reason he was not performing well as a complication of uncertainty development in him about whatever he tries to do. His personality was damaged, and he needed counseling or more probably encouragement. Many parents just give their children only limited support when their children decided concerning future education and career choices. Even some family is rich enough; the parents still choose to provide limited support for their children. I think this is a way to practice the children. In today lots of children still don’t know how to solve their questions by themselves. Their parents need to solve every problem of their children. In this background, many parents choose this way to practice their children. Comment by Kasinda C. Lang: Verb tenses/subject agreement – Check and reread this aloud. Comment by Kasinda C. Lang: Not sure if this makes sense. Comment by Kasinda C. Lang: Don’t need “In”

I think it is a good idea to solve the problem how a child to be independent. Life of a child is dependent on the supporters if they work well and encourage the child growth and development is based. Many parents in this world provide limited support to their children, and all they do is to damage the personality of their child that affects the entire life of the kid and in return ambiguity and chaos takes its place. Therefore, the parents need to be effective enough for their children in their academic goals in this way they could play a positive role in their life.