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kB7039 Assessment W21049178 UTLA.pdf

by Kusuma Sourav UTLA

Submission date: 03-May-2022 12:00PM (UTC+0100) Submission ID: 178193310 File name: kB7039_Assessment_W21049178_UTLA.pdf (529.95K) Word count: 2534 Character count: 15391

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3% SIMILARITY INDEX

1% INTERNET SOURCES

1% PUBLICATIONS

3% STUDENT PAPERS

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kB7039 Assessment W21049178 UTLA.pdf ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

Submitted to University of Northumbria at Newcastle Student Paper

www.coursehero.com Internet Source

3216.nl Internet Source

Submitted to Nottingham Trent University Student Paper

FINAL GRADE

42/100

kB7039 Assessment W21049178 UTLA.pdf GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

Three areas of good practice:

1. A problem has been identified and efforts are made to analyze and propose solutions.

2. The journal is largely plagiarism free.

3. Effort has been made to produce some figures specifically for this journal.

Three areas need improvement:

1. Figures are relatively large and interline spacing is more than it should be, resultantly, space have not been utilized effectively.

2. Refereed journal articles have not been largely used for the journal.

3. There are major language related issues in the journal leading to many sentences and paragraphs uncomphensible.

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QUALITY OF PRESENTATION 10%

Quality of presentation (including the ability to generate audience interest). The illustrated journal should use an effective combination of text AND images to provide an interesting and visually engaging document. All images should be relevant and of an appropriate size and quality. The illustrated journal should include cited, good quality academic literature and industry literature. The content should be guided by the learning outcomes, the marking criteria

GRADING FORM: KB7039 COMP 1 2021-2022

KUSUMA SOURAV UTLA 42

and the learning from this module. An individual illustrated journal of no more than 6no. A3 pages (landscape) (Excluding front page, Content page and Reference List). If more than 6 pages of content are provided, only the first 6 pages will be marked and assessed. The illustrated journal is to include approximately 50% text (using font size 10) and approximately 50% images of appropriate size.

INDUSTRY PROBLEM 30%

Depth of analysis of the industry problem. Select a single construction industry problem related to poor performance and clearly relates to one of the 8 forms of lean waste discussed during the module, include a short description and a statement that clearly and concisely defines the scope of the problem within the boundaries of this module. Justify (through good quality industry and academic literature) why this is a problem, who the problem affects, and the impact of the problem on a project/industry.

POSSIBLE SOLUTIONS 40%

Selection and analysis of possible solutions. Critically analyse possible solutions to the problem from learning during this module AND independent research.

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VISUAL ILLUSTRATION 10%

Ability to relate the problems to the solutions (visual illustration). Create a visual illustration that links the problem to the solutions, i.e. fishbone diagram, mind map or another suitable visual tool.

IMPROVEMENT MODEL 10%

Quality and originality of the improvement model. Create a visual improvement model which summarises HOW the problem can be solved.

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