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Headline: I am a/Biology pre-med student who graduates in December 2022 who is passionate about health and music and looking for Part-Time Employment. My contact info is [email protected] or 123-456-7890

Summary:

Born in the beautiful city Rio de Janeiro, home of Christ Redeemer, I am used to traveling and visiting new places. I love being on the road. I enjoy working hard and accomplishing things with excellence and beauty. If I can’t carry out by job and duty with excellence and distinction, I will not start or accept the job to begin with. If I am going to accomplish a task, I will give it my all.

I am currently attending school at University of North Texas and my GPA is currently at a 3.5 It is not where I would like it to be but I am working to make it better.

I have leadership experience in social and medical work. I have done volunteer ministries in South America since I was 12 years of age. I really am passionate about serving and giving my life for a higher cause. Giving up personal realizations or pleasures in order to help others gives a sense of realization and fulfillment.

I also have experience as a live musician and as a studio musician. I started playing piano when I was about five years of age but my obsession was always the drums. Those I started playing as soon as I was able to stand up and balance on my own which was around 11 months. I recently got into sound engineering because I wanted how to make my drums sound good like a studio recording. I bought all of the equipment and was able to learn and reach my objectives. There is always room for growth but I like the results I have obtained.

With that, I highly value my education but I also value learning things on my own and learning the thoroughly. The world is full of opportunities and I try to make the best out of every opportunity I am given.