Economics Paper

 Kindly check the following problems. I am so happy I spotted those problems before I get 0 in the class. I fixed a lot of the problems my self but the ones that remains are the following:

“like when introducing a business model.” - elaborate

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“For example, bankers and insurance companies cut” - cut what? Elaborate sentence is fragment

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“Among the many argumentative questions in the history of brokers” - dependent clause that has not been finished

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“Also, the bank provides discounting bills and overdrafts, thus promoting the part of people” - the part of people? What is the meaning?

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“The last time capitalist countries did not accept network banking, so there are more bank branches (Singh, 2020)” - last time when? Give specific time

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“Imperial explored entrepreneurial skills and scientific methods that allowed...” - do you mean imperialists?

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“he spread Western culture in which people study the Bible and pedagogical interactions.” - he? Who is he? state the name

“According to Lenin, capitalism grew through colonial oppression and the strangulation of finances, which represented a simple monopolist in a handful of monopoly companies. herefore, it contributes to the essential theoretical foundation that facilitates understanding of the main features and modern imperialism. Modern imperialism and its mechanism make it possible to maintain a monopoly over the economic state.“ - this paragraph has been re written twice in the paper. One under “Imperial State Reality” paragraph and one under “collective defense” paragraph. That is not acceptable. This needs to be fixed.

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“However, the highest aspects of the labor process and the monopoly of the highest labor productivity are controlled by trust. In this way, it facilitates the imperialist understanding that continues in everyday life. This leads to the development of non-monopoly capitalism in Third World countries (Singh, 2020). Defense forces are created by political supremacy, with one country dictating governmental rules that govern the country. Therefore, even though this creates diplomatic pressure, the government will use force in disputes between the parties involved. People were forced to go to prison, others were killed. In addition, other countries have been fully strengthened through practiced religions. The belief that people include having integral rules and trust where others think they are superior to others. For example, superpowers like the United States have strong troops and fleets that can hold security and ensure political instability in their countries (Singh, 2020). However, the government uses different strategic forces to fight other governments. For example, economic and social aspects make the country at war. Because of its adequate political, economic and relational aspects, it strengthened the United States in imperialism and financial capitalism. The above forces promote nation growth and economic development.” - this one is again written twice. Why? One under “Collective Defense Force” and one under “Monopoly Government Over the Economic State”. This is not acceptable.

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“You enjoy the availability of relief supplies and other raw materials.” - Don't use you.. change pronoun

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“the highest stage of capitalism, Vladimir Illich Lenin advises.” - advises what?

Also, highlight all new edits in different color so I know the additions so I can add them to main document that I am consistently editing