Your findings section needs a lot more depth and detail. It needs to be much more robust. I've provided some feedback on your document for your review. However, I would recommend that you review some other qualitative case studies to better understand what is needed in a findings section
Discussion of Themes Page 3 this need more work
Your analysis section is very thin and needs to be a lot more robust. You need to dig into the findings much deeper and then tie them back to the prior research. Did your findings support or contradict what you discovered in prior research?
Analysis and results for Triangulation Page 4/5 this need more work
What were those results. How did the support the findings? This section needs a lot more depth.
Relationship to Findings Page 5 this need more work
This entire section needs to be more in-depth and thorough. You may want to review other qualitative studies to better understand how to dig deep into your findings section.
Literature page 7 this need more work
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