Final

Introduction by Candi Jackson

Submission date: 09-Mar-2025 05:29PM (UTC-0500) Submission ID: 2609772503

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I truly hope you can do this study once you get into graduate school. Excellent work! See needed corrections... not many.

Globally, the elderly population is rapidly increasing.

"to die quicker"

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For Question 1, start thinking about how you will obtain this data, from recruiting participants or a family member or staff member if the individual is deceased. In fact, for this study, you will be dealing with an archive on deceased elderly. You will have to be creative since the dead do not speak. For Question 2, you may want to make this a longitudinal type study, at least three to five years. For Question 3, I will leave this to you. Current health status upon entrance to a facility or upon the determination that an individual will need assisted living.

The first letter in the subtitle is capitalized.

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FINAL GRADE

20/20

Introduction GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

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Text Comment. I truly hope you can do this study once you get into graduate school. Excellent work! See needed corrections... not many.

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Text Comment. Globally, the elderly population is rapidly increasing.

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Text Comment. "to die quicker"

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Text Comment. For Question 1, start thinking about how you will obtain this data, from recruiting participants or a family member or staff member if the individual is deceased. In fact, for this study, you will be dealing with an archive on deceased elderly. You will have to be creative since the dead do not speak. For Question 2, you may want to make this a longitudinal type study, at least three to five years. For Question 3, I will leave this to you. Current health status upon entrance to a facility or upon the determination that an individual will need assisted living.

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Text Comment. The first letter in the subtitle is capitalized.

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Comment 6

1. The first letter of each word in the journal title is capitalized. The journal title should also be in italicized, along with the first number after the journal title, 50 in this case. The normal format would be: Croatian Medical Journal, 50(2) unless the 2 is an article number rather than an Issue number. If an issue number, it should be in parenthesis and butted up against the volume number. 

Comment 7

Close the space between the period and the DOI address.

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My guess is the 50 is the volume number, so it should be italicized like the journal title.

Comment 10

Remove the extra comma.

Comment 11

If this is the volume number, make it italicized.