for brilliant answer

FA 101 INTRODUCTION TO ART Theme Essay I

Integrating Written Feedback as part of Revision

§ You received points in the following five categories:

- Follow the guidelines and topic, *underline thesis in your essay*, turned in on time - Specific evidence discussed - Evidence cited properly - Claim, thesis or argument (specific and debatable) - Structure and level of writing,

§ Respond to the points assigned to the above categories identifying specific ways to improve your

essay, whether from the body of your essay, references, appendix of images and/or works cited.

o For example, if you lost points for ‘4. Claim, thesis or argument’, you might revise your central argument so that it is more specific. Then you rewove it back into your essay by strengthening topic sentences for paragraphs two, four and six. Include this and the specific sentences in your explanation of changes made.

§ If you would like clarification you are welcome to make an appointment to meet with the TA who graded your classes essay. However, the revision is about your interpreting the feedback and integrating it as part of the process of revising. 1. Revise your essay based on the above. 2. In a letter to the TA write point-by-point about specific ways that your essay addressed and improved (highlight particular sentences, paragraphs, references, etc.) each of the five categories.

The revised essay and letter are due one week today as an electronic copy on Blackboard. Your current grade will be replaced.* (no emailed or late papers please) *If you received an incredibly high mark and do not wish to complete this assignment, you may be excused.