Computer Science CAPSTONE CS698

Opportunities for improvement:

> Your research matter provides some terms, but does not explicitly state how they will be used in your experiment.

> There is no information connecting your experiment to the data needed to prove or disprove your hypothesis.

> You provide no information on your experiment design. Without this information, your experiment could not be replicated. As an example, you must provide details on the surveys as well as your planned analysis technique.

> You must go beyond general ideas and concepts to describe an explicit experiment that supports the objectives of your capstone paper.

> Minimal evidence previous IP comments have been addressed. This results in numerous technical, grammar, and formatting errors throughout the paper that must be corrected.

> I am unable to find any explicit list of the tasks and sub-tasks needed to execute your project.

> The text provided is difficult to understand and seems to be focused on only portions of the project.

> There is no project timeline provided that shows the tasks, sub-tasks, duration, and resources for the project.

> The costs only cover a single activity and not the costs for the entire project.

> No Cost Benefit Analysis is provided to determine if the costs of the project is worth the expenditure must have a complete cost business analysis.

> Numerous technical, grammatical, and formatting errors remain throughout the paper. IP3 comments have not been addressed.