Management of Information Systems

Marilyn,

Thank you for your re-submission.

I have concerns with your assignment.

You still have not addressed the assignment. You are not relating this to your start-up business. How are you integrating the information and gaining a competitive advantage. This is from the feedback on the previous assignment.

“In this Assignment, you will describe the types of information systems that you have decided to use in your business startup and briefly describe their functions and how they provide a competitive advantage.” ( From the assignment)

The purpose of the assignment is to apply what you have learned to your startup company.

What types of information systems are you using? What functional areas? Are you using an ERP, EAI, or stand alone? How are they integrated? How are you gaining a competitive advantage?

Additionally:

You appear to be doing patch writing. Copying directly from others and then changing a few words in what has been copied. Your assignment has a relatively high similarity score and would be even higher with the changed words added.

Your references are not in correct APA format and very similar to the attached article. They are not listed alphabetically by the authors last name. Also several of your sources are textbooks of over 500 pages and cover basically the same material as our text book. If you are using something as a source, I would assume that you have read it. That is a lot of reading in brief turn around on the document.

If you would like to discuss this, please give me a phone number and time to call you.