Revision for sexual problems assignment

Rubrics

Criteria 1

Apply psychological theories to a case study in human sexuality.

Apply psychological theories to topics in human sexuality.

NON_PERFORMANCE Does not describe psychological theories or apply them to a case study in human sexuality. BASIC Describes psychological theories, but does not apply them to a case study in human sexuality. PROFICIENT Applies psychological theories to a case study in human sexuality. DISTINGUISHED Provides a detailed application of psychological theories to a case study in human sexuality, illustrating a clear link between the theories and the case.

Comments:

You did share an application of psychological theories to your case in human sexuality. In order to improve your score, you can include a clear link between the theory and the case. You suggested "Sigmund Freud believed that the sexual action of rape was responsible for causing hysteria or what we now refer to as PTSD. From Charcot,Freud borrows the notion of the "trigger" or the "provoking agent" that unleashes the hysterical symptoms." How do you know? Be sure to cite all sources.

Criteria 2

Apply scholarly research findings to a case study in human sexuality.

Apply scholarly research findings to topics in human sexuality.

NON_PERFORMANCE Does not apply scholarly research findings to a case study in human sexuality. BASIC Applies scholarly research findings to a case study in human sexuality at a cursory level. PROFICIENT Applies scholarly research findings to a case study in human sexuality. DISTINGUISHED Provides a detailed application of scholarly research findings to a case study in human sexuality, illustrating a clear link between the research findings and the case.

Comments:

You did share an application of some scholarly research findings to a case in human sexuality. In order to move to a higher level, you can include a clear link between the theory and the case and always cite properly. Be sure to use only proper sources too.

Criteria 3

Explain how ethics inform professional behavior in the field of human sexuality.

Explain how ethics inform professional behavior in the field of human sexuality.

NON_PERFORMANCE Does not explain how ethics inform professional behavior in the field of human sexuality. BASIC Explains, at a cursory level, how ethics inform professional behavior in the field of human sexuality. PROFICIENT Explains how ethics inform professional behavior in the field of human sexuality. DISTINGUISHED Applies ethical guidelines and standards to inform professional behavior in the field of human sexuality and illustrates the application with relevant examples.

Comments:

You did not apply ethical guidelines to inform professional behavior. You need to use the APA Code of Ethics and apply the standards properly to the case.

Directions state “Examine and explain how ethical standards guide professional behavior as it relates to the issues and concepts identified in the selected human sexuality case study. You must state the specific ethical standard that relates to the topic or issue highlighted in the case study and explain how this ethical standard guides professional behavior.” Be sure to clearly cite the standards from the Code of Ethics.

Criteria 4

Write coherently to support a central idea with correct grammar, usage, and mechanics as expected of a psychology professional.

Communicate in a manner that is scholarly, professional, and consistent with expectations for professionals in the field of psychology.

NON_PERFORMANCE Writing does not support a central idea and does not use correct grammar, usage, and mechanics as expected of a psychology professional. BASIC Writing supports an idea but is inconsistent and contains major errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics. PROFICIENT Writing coherently supports a central idea with few errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics. DISTINGUISHED Writing is coherent and uses evidence to support a central idea with correct grammar, usage, and mechanics as expected of a psychology professional.

Comments:

Your overall writing was good

Avoid writing in the first person

proof read Freuds theory should be Freud's theory

You need to cite and credit all sources throughout your paper

use only peer reviewed and scholarly sources to support your work

Criteria 5

Use APA format and style.

Communicate in a manner that is scholarly, professional, and consistent with expectations for professionals in the field of psychology.

NON_PERFORMANCE Does not use APA format and style. BASIC Uses APA format and style but inconsistently and with errors. PROFICIENT Uses APA format and style consistently and with few errors. DISTINGUISHED Uses correct APA format and style consistently and with no errors.

Comments:

You followed APA rules but had some errors

Be sure to use proper font only -12 Times New Roman

Words Running head only appear on title page

review placement of headings

citations are (Last name, year).

All references need to follow APA rules