Some edit needed for my essay

Hello, I guess we have danced around this long enough...but you still have several errors that I'm disappointed you have not corrected. 1. Header is the wrong font and wrong size 2. Header space between your last name and the page number 3. Too much extra space between the date and the title 4. You don't have a title! YOUR original work needs YOUR original title. Your title should tell the reader something about your paper. "The Dark Side of the Moon" is Pink Floyd's title, not yours 5. The Dark Side of the Moon must be italicized and capitalized correctly when referenced in your paper 6. You do not have a thesis: "I will look as the aspects that made this band and the album very successful does not contain an argument. 7. There should NEVER be 1st person used in academic writing (unless you are directed to write a narrative essay or creative writing) 8. This is NOT a narrative essay, so why are you writing about your experiences? This is a critical analysis of the album 9. There are unnecessary errors: "this band emerged as one f my favorites. My earliest memories o this band was when" 10. I don't want history, "Alan Parson was the engineer of this band" I want a critical analysis of the MUSIC 11. Your paper is aligned Justified and it MUST be Align Left 12. Incorrect citations: (Kress, 2017 p4). 13. You have many incomplete paragraphs. You must (at a minimum) have 5 sentences paragraphs: 1) topic sentence 2) introduction to an idea/quote 3) the idea/quote 4) ANALYSIS of the idea quote (this is the most important thing in academic writing) 5) concluding sentence 14. You don't write "CONCLUSION" in your paper, and a conclusion should be several paragraphs summarizing everything that came before, not a couple of sentences. And this is not a music review, stop writing like it is. This is critical thinking analysis. 15. "Works Cited" 16. delete extra space between Works Cites and your first entry Gatt.