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I received this back from my instructor from the Coaching Philosophy paper you did for me. I got deducted for it only being two (2) pages and only having two (2) sources. The instructions called for AT LEAST two (2) pages and AT LEAST three (3) references.

On the written assignment, I highlighted several areas that needed improvement on your paper for feedback:

1. Title Page - Missing school affiliation (AMU and/or APUS - spelled out) - This information is found in the APA Manual.

2. Three additional places where citations were needed (actually there were a couple more that I probably should have designated).

3. Two uses of vernacular expressions (these are best not used in scholarly assignments - Not always good to write like you talk).

4. All non-web citations should include the appropriate page number(s).

5. Best not to use "I's" (first person references) in a scholarly paper. Write in the 3rd person.

6. The "Goffena" source listed on the Reference Page was a Journal that requires the Volume and page number(s).