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The goal is to change the title overall to something along the lines of his title while incorporating my initial vision. You don’t have to do that I will but its okay if you gave thoughts

I cannot focus on children in research for it is to much to get approval so I choose to focus on African American Collegiate males. YOU WILL NOTICE ECACTLY THE SAME AS HIS. but the info I provided about kids and effects is cool.

Just making sure you understand that im changing the name of my paper and how im going about the work I will do. It will be closely if not exactly like his so keep that in mind as you edit and change it.

For this we are only focusing on first 3 chapters as I stated I have already written it.

What I need from you is to infuse the other document within mines.

My goal is to change the them of mines to more align with the one im sending.

When you see the completed document, it will be written in past tense, however we are writing in present tense as our work has not been done. So be sure that when you use information from completed document that you change tense. It is okay to use the references in other document just as they are.

You will not have to research anything unless you so choose there is enough information to use just make sure it is all added to my document appropriately.

Chapter 1

I want pretty much my words to be my words as they are while correcting problems he as stated. You will correct it infusing info from other paper. My documents is edited but we shifting some things so some of editing would not matter just restructure paper.

You will form my paper closely related to mentoring and stereo types just like his

Chapter two

This is literature the literature I provided is good you can add some from his paper chapter two literature to make sure they mesh.

Chapter 3

Is really the complete overhall

Here is where you will just mimic pretty much everything he said in his paper, but switching a words its okay to use same references.

This is methodology so it has to be damn near exact because that’s the way im going to do research when I do mines exactly the same.

That’s all we need to do you don’t have to go further into his document pass chapter 3. and can stop once its edited and changed.

Please let me know if you do not understand ANYTHING and [email protected] is email please please contact me for anything directly. I know we are not supposed to give email but this is important.