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I just looked at your writing submission and posted some comments. To make sure you get them, I have posted them below. Thanks.

 There are good ideas in this writing, though not much analysis (except in the feminism section), and there is no thesis, only a description of what you will do in the writing. Be that as it may, I cannot accept this essay because it does not meet the requirements of the assignment. You must quote from at least four sources in your writing, at least two of which must be peer reviewed (or a close equivalent) sources.  You have not quoted from at least 4 sources. There is only one, and not essential, quotation from Cocca. I have no choice but to give you an F. 

However, you can redo the essay and provide the missing quotations. Please do this as quickly as possible and send it to my umb email. I have to have the grades in and will wait until tomorrow morning for your redo.