Research Argument revise

I enjoyed reading The Pros and Cons of Polygamy In African Culture: A Nursing Student’s Perspective. I was somewhat confused in bits and pieces of this essay, for instance, are you saying that polygamy is connected to economic and social stability? I was not sure if you were inducting an in text citation from (Njoh 2016) because it did not have any quotation marks in your essay at all. Noticeably, when I read that polygamy has the possibility to increase fertility rates and reproduction, which can contribute to the growth and population. I have watched a few documentaries on polygamy and there are a lot of women that already have their own children before she met the polygamist. Polygamy is worldwide and most definitely here in the United States of America. Becoming a nurse is great and I applaud you, but how would you tackle this matter, as you stated in your text? A nurse takes care of one’s physical needs, such as HIV, but what does being a nurse has to do with how one chooses to live their life?