Business start up project

Ibrahim AL Suroor Sandscreen by Ibrahim Munassar S Al Suroor

Submission date: 24-Mar-2024 11:33PM (UTC+0000) Submission ID: 227750508 File name: 163623_Ibrahim_Munassar_S_Al_Suroor_Ibrahim_AL_Suroor_Sandscreen_2742670_1446508626.docx (214.51K) Word count: 2901 Character count: 17487

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9% STUDENT PAPERS

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Ibrahim AL Suroor Sandscreen ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

Submitted to University of Northampton Student Paper

Submitted to Acsenda School of Management Student Paper

Submitted to Nelson Marlborough Institute of Technology Student Paper

sofew.cfr.msstate.edu Internet Source

myassignmenthelp.com Internet Source

etd.lib.nsysu.edu.tw Internet Source

Submitted to Florida International University Student Paper

Submitted to Adventist University of Health Sciences Student Paper

link.springer.com

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Internet Source

Submitted to Middlesex University Student Paper

1library.net Internet Source

ebin.pub Internet Source

Submitted to University of Westminster Student Paper

finance.yahoo.com Internet Source

thedailyguardian.com Internet Source

FINAL GRADE

22/100

Ibrahim AL Suroor Sandscreen GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

EXECUTIVE SUMMARY

This does not reflect the purpose of an executive summary.

BUSINESS DETAILS

Missing three quizzes and discussion of them.

Hours of operation.

More references to support your claims.

Lacks in-depth discussion (i.e., why; when; where; how). 

INDUSTRY AND MARKET ANALYSIS

References to support your analysis (i.e. SWOT; PESTEL; Porter’s)

Aim to focus more on in-depth discussion of why you are making these decisions.

Use more references to build a stronger argument to support your rationale.

Lacks in-depth discussion to support why your decisions are legitimate/valid (references). 

Missing topics in this section.

You misunderstand some of the business concepts.

CUSTOMERS AND VALUE PROPOSITIONS

Business model selection does not align with business type.

Lacks in-depth discussion to support why your decisions are legitimate/valid (references). 

Lacks convincing evidence for business model selection (references and examples).

MARKETING STRATEGY

Lacks in-depth discussion to support why your decisions are legitimate/valid (references).

Lacks significant information in this section.

Lacks in-depth discussion (i.e., why; when; where; how). 

OPERATIONS PLAN

No Gantt Chart and discussion.

Missing significant discussion of information in this section supported by references.

Missing significant legal operations required for your business (i.e. health & safety; licensing, etc.).

Lacks in-depth discussion to support why your decisions are legitimate/valid (references).

RISKS

Violates 1 page limit. only 5 risks graded 5/10 points. 

MANAGEMENT TEAM

Lacks in-depth discussion to support why your decisions are legitimate/valid (references).

Missing significant discussion of information in this section.

Lacks discussion on culture.

RESOURCES

Lacks in-depth discussion to support why your decisions are legitimate/valid (references).

Fail to be specific.

No/lacks discussion of Financial Resources.

No/lacks discussion of Human Resources.

No/lacks discussion of your Social Resources (Strong/Weak Networks).

FINANCING

There are little/no references to support and justify your claims/numbers.

There is no financial template submitted. None of your financials can be verified/validated.

There is a significant lack in justifying/explaining what your results mean.

Financial Template is incomplete.

Struggle to relate to the concepts explained to actionable items.

GENERAL

Unfortunately, there is a significant amount of information missing from this submission, which can be found on the Assessment 2 Guide.

Aim to add clarity to your arguments (i.e., why; when; where; how). 

At times, the business plan offers unnecessary information. 

 You do not address a significant number of key topics in this section.

Formatting: Make sure each section started on a new page.

Overall, this business plan is poor and does not represent the quality that is expected at a third-year undergraduate level.

REFERENCES

Given the complexity of the topic, aim to use more references.

Make sure you use research and references to support your ideas and examples.

This plan lacks significant references and resources to support your claims.

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Comment 1

Good logo. 

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Comment 2

Brief. 

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Comment 3

You cannot start as a medium sized company (over 100 employees). 

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Comment 4

References to support numbers? 

Comment 5

No references in this section. 

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Comment 6

References for this section? 

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Comment 7

References to support any of this information? 

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Comment 8

Should be in the appendix. 

Comment 9

Should be on a new page. 

Again, references to support any of this information? 

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Comment 10

8 references for a third year, final project?