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HowtowriteanIntroduction-TheFirstParagraph_tcm18-1176501.pptxWhat is an Introduction?
An introduction may be many different things, depending on the type of writing you are doing
In an empirical paper—a proposal or research paper—an introduction does three things:
Introduces your topic
Reviews the literature of your topic
States your hypotheses or research questions
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The Outline of an Introduction
Here is a very broad outline. The slides that follow show how to write the opening paragraph. The other sections are covered in a different tutorial
I. Opening paragraph
II. Review of the literature
III. Summary paragraph and statement of hypotheses or research questions
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The Opening Paragraph
This is a key paragraph
It lets the reader know what to expect
It gives the reader a general roadmap for your paper
It may mention papers you will review in more detail later
For a very long paper it may be more than one paragraph
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The opening paragraph
Includes 5 basic pieces of information, usually in this order:
A statement of the general topic
A general statement about what the literature has found
A statement about what the literature is missing or where there is an unanswered question
The aim of the study
A general statement of the study approach
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The opening paragraph-Example
For a study about child development, parenting and culture
Parenting style is a well established influence on child development (Bornstein, 2003). Research indicates that different parenting styles are generally predictive of academic and emotional adaptation in children (Steinberg, Elmen & Mounts, 1989) . However, some research has suggested that the influence of parenting style may vary across cultures and by immigration status (Frankel & Roer-Bornstein, 1982). The aim of the current study was to examine how parenting style among first-generation immigrants from the African diaspora influenced child development. The study examined parenting style and child outcomes within a community of Somalian immigrants in the Northeastern United States.
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Opening paragraph-First Sentence
A statement of the general topic:
Parenting style is a well established influence on child development (Bornstein, 2003).
Note
The statement is general, but not too general
it is not a sweeping statement
The statement is empirical—it is a statement of research findings
Not an opinion
The statement includes a citation
This citation may be reviewed in more detail later in the paper
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Opening paragraph-Second Sentence
A statement about what the literature has found
Research indicates that different parenting styles are generally predictive of academic and emotional adaptation in children (Steinberg, Elmen & Mounts, 1989) .
This is more specific than your first statement
It introduces the reader to the specific area you are interested in
Parenting style and academic and emotional outcomes in children
It includes a citation
Which you will review in more detail later in the introduction
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Opening Paragraph-Third Sentence
A statement about what the literature is missing or where there is an unanswered question
However, some research has suggested that the influence of parenting style may vary across cultures and by immigration status (Frankel & Roer-Bornstein, 1982).
Note
This statement is a contrast with the previous statement
It says not all parenting styles lead to the same outcome
It introduces the idea that there is a an unanswered question to be explored
It includes a citation
Which will be reviewed in more detail later in the paper
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Opening Paragraph-Fourth Sentence
The aim of the study
The aim of the current study was to examine how parenting style among first-generation immigrants from the African diaspora influenced child development.
This tells the reader generally what your study is about
It should be a study that responds to the question you identified in the previous sentence
Because the study is completed, it is a statement in the past tense
For a proposal the statement would be in the future tense
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Opening Paragraph-Fifth Sentence
A general statement of the study approach
The study examined parenting style and child outcomes within a community of Somalian immigrants in the Northeastern United States.
This tells the reader just a little about your sample and method
Not too much
Enough so that the reader understands why you review certain types of articles
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