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kilisol1467:HIV_(1).docx by Lucia Kiliso

Submission date: 27-Apr-2021 07:00AM (UTC-0400) Submission ID: 1571278689 File name: 03_Assignments_0ff337cf-3e94-413e-bed7-0001c4eb2676_HIV__1.docx (20.7K) Word count: 684 Character count: 3775

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kilisol1467:HIV_(1).docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

"HIV/AIDS in South Africa 25 Years On", Springer Science and Business Media LLC, 2009 Publication

Submitted to University of Arizona Student Paper

en.wikipedia.org Internet Source

Submitted to University of South Dakota Student Paper

Submitted to Tufts University Student Paper

Submitted to University of Johannsburg Student Paper

scholarworks.waldenu.edu Internet Source

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ccms.ukzn.ac.za

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kilisol1467:HIV_(1).docx GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

PAGE 1

Comment 1

Use MLA format. This is APA.

Comment 2

No headings in MLA format.

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Comment 3

Your using exact language here without quotation marks, which is plagiarism. Make sure you avoid this in your final draft. 

Comment 4

Make your solutions clear in your thesis statement - the last sentence of your introduction paragraph. 

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Comment 5

Introduce authors with a bit of info on who they are. Why are they trustworthy? 

Comment 6

explore a single solution - you don't have to fully solve the problem. What is one thing we can do or proposal we can support to start addressing the problem? 

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Comment 7

Use MLA format. 

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