ASSI 7(10)

1. Running header should be the title of your paper.

 

2. Abstract is fine for the draft paper. But for the final paper, Abstract should be a summary of your whole project. So, you will need to describe in short what you propose and what your accomplishments are.

 

3. Section headings can be left-aligned with no TAB.

 

4. “Significance of the Study” should be highlights of your work, not importance of the topic.

 

5. Is Fig. 1 created by you or taken from a paper? If taken from a paper, you need to cite the reference. If created by you, what is the purpose of it in “Literature Review”? Also, you don’t seem to have referred to Fig. 1 in your writing.

 

6. The same comment for Fig. 2, Fig. 3 and Fig. 4.

 

7. Chapters 4 and 5 should start from a new page.

 

8. What is the different between section 4.1 and Literature Review? You are discussing on results published by other papers. You didn’t do any data analysis.

 

9. You should have some results based on your proposed solution to support your hypothesis.

 

10. Proofread the paper for spelling and grammar mistakes. In Word, it highlights the errors with red and blue underlines.