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Hello, the introduction needs a little more improvement to get others to read. The introduction does give the author and title. The thesis offer an interpretation, clear and specific. The body paragraph gives organized around the key point offer support with quotations from the story, with examples analyzed and explain well. I have no disagreements with analysis and no suggestions with improving the body paragraph. Your conclusion gives summarizations to the main points. The ending does leaves the reader satisfied.