paper edited

Overall all your paper covers an interesting topic. Please continue to refine your draft and final product to align with APA 6. Your paper is still formatted like an outline (Get rid of that). Also pay attention to some of the examples listed below:

- Title of paper is too long. 

-You must start the second page with a level one header that is the same as the title of the paper. 

- Bold all level one headings. 

- Review reference list to align with APA 6 standards. 

- Pay attention to passive voice within the paper. 

-Use the following acronym to assist in forming a paragraph 

M- Main Idea

E- Evidence of Example

A- Analysis 

L- Link to next thought

Overall good job, I look forward to the final paper.