Discussion board

Address the following in your peer review:

1) What is the essay's thesis?

2) Are the sources cited and incorporated in proper MLA style?

3) Does the essay seem complete?

4) What are the weakest parts of the essay?

5) What are the strongest parts of the essay?

6) Are there errors in grammar and/or sentence structure that reduce the quality of the essay? If so, please give specific examples.

7) Do you have any suggestions for improvement?

NOTE: The total of your comments must equal at least 250 words. Make an effort to give helpful feedback, rather than answering the questions yes or no