obesity

Category

Exceeds

standards

Meets

standards

Slightly meets

Standards

Does not meet

standards

No evidence

Score

Title page

Title

Student’s name

Course name

Date

Evidence of three

items

Evidence of two

items

Evidence of one

No title page

Initial

Claim

(main idea) and

Introduction

Reason for choosing

population and

general narrative

Clearly and concisely

states the population and

the model used.

Exceptional introduction

includes main idea and

provides a preview of the

paper’s context and

structure

Clearly states the

population and the

model used.

Effective introduction

that connects the

main idea to the

paper’s context

May state the

population and/or

may include model.

Somewhat effective

introduction that

attempts to connect

main idea to paper’s

context

Incomplete and/or

Unfocused.

Introduction without

connection to the

main idea or to the

paper’s context

Population or

model absent.

No clear

introduction.

No connection

to main idea or

paper’s context

Core information

Includes:

tools/framework,

priority health

issues, references,

determinants of

health

process and

research using

primary, secondary,

And tertiary

Paragraphs demonstrate

exceptional organization

and state the main idea

with inclusion of

supportive data

Paragraphs reflect

organization and

state the main idea

with inclusion of

supportive data

Paragraphs reflect

Collection using:

epidemiology,

community survey,

and/or supportive

data

Paragraphs are

ineffective with

minimal or no

connection to

supportive data

Paragraphs

ineffective with

data

inaccurately

defined

Data

Information

Includes:

Epidemiology,

community survey,

needs assessment,

techniques used,

and supportive data

Includes exceptional

data collection using: epidemiology,

community survey,

and supportive data

Includes data

collection using:

epidemiology,

community survey,

and supportive data

Includes some data

collection using:

epidemiology,

community survey,

and/or supportive

data

Ineffective data

collection. May

include one or

more; epidemiology,

community survey,

supportive data

Ineffective

collection of

data

Data analysis

Compares data

and issues of

concern

Presents exceptional and appropriate data.

Exceptional explanation

and analysis that

connects the data

to the main idea and

issues of concern

Presents appropriate

data.

Explanation and

analysis that

connects the data to

the main idea and

issues of concern

Presents some data.

Explanations and

Analysis contain

inaccuracies that

interfere with main

idea

Ineffective data that

does not connect to

main idea.

Ineffective

explanation or

analysis to main

idea.

No evidence

of awareness of

needed data.

Failure to

explain or

analyze data.

Health program

planning

development

Interventions:

Health program planning development; PDCA format

Primary, secondary,

and tertiary

Promotion, outreach,

and awareness

Presents exceptional

approach to interventions.

Acknowledges

multi-dimensional

approach with synthesis

of various perspectives

and awareness

Presents appropriate

approach to

interventions.

Acknowledges

Multi-dimensional

approach with

synthesis of various

perspectives and

awareness

Presents simplified

approach to

interventions.

Acknowledges

vague perspectives

and awareness

Presents little or no

approach to

interventions.

Ineffective or vague

acknowledgement to perspectives.

May not include

awareness

No evidence of

interventions.

Failure to

acknowledge

various

perspectives and

awareness

Considerations

Current public

policies.

Ethical dilemmas or

considerations.

Cultural

characteristics.

Analysis and

comparison to

general population.

Includes exceptional

considerations which

assist to clarify

information for accuracy,

relevance, and validity.

Information clearly

relates to main topic

Includes

considerations that

assist to clarify

information for

accuracy, relevance,

and validity.

Information relates

to main topic

Minimally includes

considerations that

may or may not

assist to clarify

information for

accuracy, relevance,

and validity.

Information may

or may not relate

to main topic

Does not present

considerations to

support or clarify

information.

Accuracy, relevance,

and validity are

vague.

Information does not

relate to or

support main topic

No evidence of

considerations.

Accuracy,

relevance, and

validity vague.

Information

does not

relate to or

support main

topic

Conclusion

Anticipate of new or

revised health

policy needs.

Informed decision

for future plan.

Lessons learned/

thoughts

An exceptional

conclusion that is

engaging and restates the

main idea.

Conclusion is well

supported, creative,

and relevant

Conclusion restates

the main idea and is

supported, creative,

and relevant

Conclusion may

vaguely include

main idea.

Conclusion may not

accurately support

presented topic.

Conclusion does

not include main

idea.

Conclusion fails

to accurately

support presented

topic

No evidence of

main topic in

attempted

conclusion.

Fails to

accurately

support

presented topic

Formatting,

Grammar, and

Usage

Font 12 point.

Correct margins.

Follows assignment

specific

instructions.

No run-on or

fragmented

sentences. Correct

punctuation. Correct

subject to verb.

Correct

capitalization and

spelling.

Correct formatting

Exceptional writing with

complex vocabulary and

correct grammar and

sentence structure.

Correct formatting.

Effective writing

with varied

sentence structure

and correct grammar.

Mostly correct

formatting.

Somewhat effective

or correct Grammar.

Minimal varied

sentence structure

Somewhat correct

formatting.

Inconsistent or

ineffective grammar.

Poor sentence

structure.

Incorrect

Formatting.

Poor grammar.

Poor sentence

structure.

Citation

Sites all data used

from other sources.

All cited works are

done in correct

format with no errors

Some works cited and

are done in

correct format with

no errors

Few cited works.

May or may not be

in correct format

with/without errors

No cited works in

Paper. References

in correct format

with/without errors

No cited works.

No references.