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Nouf Alkhathamy

Dr. Chauna Craig

December 5, 2017

Overall feedback:

The presentation overall was clear and understandable; it was a fun idea by starting it with Kahoot game. Asking few questions at the beginning of the performance can help the audience to be active and focus on you. I liked how they started, Harri gave us a precise information about who is DuBois. He talked for about few minutes which is excellent and enough for them as a group gave each one the right to talk about his time. Their presentation was included with almost all the requirements to have a complete presentation. Their presentation was active and fun in the beginning, but unfortunately, it is starting to be boring in the end. Giving the audience information just by reading them from the computer’s screen make them unfocused and bored. So I could not be able to understand everything was saying.

Voice level:

The other good thing is the voice level, which was clear and easy to hear. The voice level is an essential skill to grab audience’s attention. Also, the pronunciation that many students don’t take it seriously and academically. It is a requirement for having a complete presentation. This group had these two skills which I liked.

My opinion:

In my opinion, they did an excellent job in the begging, but it was not in the end. They took more time than they had to, so they made the presentation longer than it had to be. Giving that much of information just because you want to provide all the information that does not add anything to your performance except making it boring and letting the audience waiting to the end of the presentation. I am not trying to be rude but as someone who gives a feedback and wants your future job to be better. Also, I suggest that you should prepare before doing the presentation and practice for many times to avoid reading from the slides and taking more time.