I appreciate your work on this assignment but I need you to be more critical and provide further explanation of your evaluations, especially with some citations to support your ideas. Please see feedback as you'll need to integrate that for the final project.
Dr. Guevara
( 3.80 / 5.00) Evaluates a Staff Manual, Applying Knowledge of Effective Policies and Procedures, and Provides Recommendations or Commendations, Each Supported with a Rationale
Basic - Minimally evaluates a staff manual, applying some knowledge of policies and procedures, and provides recommendations or commendation, each somewhat supported with a limited rationale. Relevant details are missing.
Comments:
Your application of policy and procedures to the evaluation and rationale are mostly appropriate. More details and a clear rationale were needed.
( 0.84 / 1.10) Critical Thinking: Explanation of Issues
Basic - Briefly explains the issue to be considered, delivering minimal information for a basic understanding.
Comments:
The explanation of the issue should be more objective than personal. This makes academic work more valid.
( 0.84 / 1.10) Creative Thinking: Acquiring Competencies
Basic - Successfully adapts an appropriate exemplar to certain specifications.
( 0.18 / 0.20) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics
Proficient - Displays comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains only a few minor errors and is mostly easy to understand.
Comments:
Good job! Correct conventions facilitate the reading of the text.
( 0.18 / 0.20) Written Communication: APA Formatting
Proficient - Exhibits APA formatting throughout the paper. However, layout contains a few minor errors.
( 0.20 / 0.20) Written Communication: Page Requirement
Distinguished - The length of the paper is equivalent to the required number of correctly formatted pages.
( 0.15 / 0.20) Written Communication: Resource Requirement
Basic - Uses less than the required number of sources to support ideas. Some sources may not be scholarly. Most sources on the reference page are used within the body of the assignment. Citations may not be formatted correctly.
Overall Score: 6.19 / 8.00
Overall Grade: 6.19