Nursing Leadership

D.Asbill-N496-M03.docx by Dusti Asbill

Submission date: 17-May-2020 08:32AM (UTC-0400) Submission ID: 1326183292 File name: D.Asbill-N496-M03.docx (18.67K) Word count: 1119 Character count: 6204

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10% SIMILARITY INDEX

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10% STUDENT PAPERS

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D.Asbill-N496-M03.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT

PRIMARY SOURCES

Submitted to Aspen University Student Paper

Submitted to Southern New Hampshire University - Continuing Education Student Paper

Submitted to Argosy University Student Paper

Submitted to American Intercontinental University Online Student Paper

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FINAL GRADE

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D.Asbill-N496-M03.docx GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Introduction paragraph missing

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heading should be centered

Citation Needed Cite Source: Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html

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spell out abbreviations before you use them

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their employers

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Improper Citation Improper citation: Improperly cited material. Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html Additional Comment

cannot use the et al for less than 6 authors initially

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no comma

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comma

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WC Word choice error: Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very difficult to do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too hard to come up with a fancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a handy tool when you're trying to find a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one you're looking up. However, it can often introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it has exactly the same meaning.

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not a full sentence

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what does lock out mean?

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Center heading

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an administration

Improper Citation Improper citation: Improperly cited material. Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html Additional Comment

not enough authors for an et al

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Sometimes

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practice

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retention

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no comma after the author

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no comma

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one word

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these

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what procedure?

what is the foundation? It's committees

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voices

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if you start with plural stay with it

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how is that different from unit councils?

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what is the approach?

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where's the reference information?

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Evaluation

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retrieved from?

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edition number missing

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