800-1000 words cultural psychology essay

Intro -1.25

it does not make sense to define culture at the beginning of paper and then discuss the goal of the paper that culture is defined differently depending on context (contradictory argument)

Body - 3.5

- definitions given

- vague arguments at points

-issues with flow of arguments

- compares and contrasts cultures, rather than definitions of cultures

Discussion - 2.0

- does not restate goals

- gives personal impressions, though not as clearly as needed

- does not offer gaps in definitions or open questions

- synthesizes

Technical - 0.0

- quotes need to include page number at the end of the sentence.

Correction: 

- First citation in paragraph: e.g., Heine (2020) or (Heine, 2020). 

- Later citations in paragraph can be: Heine or (Heine, 2020). 

 - Repeat in next paragraph.

- don't include authors initials in citation. 

-"each other actions" 

- punctuation issues

- "sociologists' states"

- black/blank

- capitalize Western

References - .75

- issues with italics, electronic resources, spacing