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GENERAL COMMENTS—CASE 1

Incorporate statesmanship model within case. Apply the model rather than just state it.

Interpersonal skills of statesmanship applied to main character(s) in case., not just mentioned.

Much of text is not supported by citations but opinion.

Integrate Biblical principles within the analysis of the paper not just added at the end of case.

Importance of emotional intelligence and covenant not just mentioned but analyzed as part of

case.

The case is not fabricated or an opinion of the student.

There are no specific characters. The case is too general. Be specific about Mayor and Board of Alderman by name, their decisions, actions, etc.

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