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This is a good attempt at an Executive Summary but it seem too long to me. The reader is the client (the Foodprint) manager, so you need to make the description of what Foodprint does and how it currently creates value shorter; the emphasis should be on how Foodprint's service could be improved based on your analysis .

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17 I am not quite sure what the overall purpose of this paragraph is? Are you trying to say what is good about the FoodPrint app from a design thinking point of view is?

who is the target consumer you are doing the digital consumer journey for?

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Text Comment. This is a good attempt at an Executive Summary but it seem too long to me. The reader is the client (the Foodprint) manager, so you need to make the description of what Foodprint does and how it currently creates value shorter; the emphasis should be on how Foodprint's service could be improved based on your analysis .

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encouraging ..

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I don't think you have 'evaluated' these .. you seem to have just decsribed them

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.Then, but analysing the digital consumer journey, the report comes up with a number of digital business opportunities for Foodprint, and priorities and thinks through these ...

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with consumers

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lowers carbon

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can you explain or define this?

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FoodPrint

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Do you have evidence for this?

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this seems repetitive?

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, which is

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is built around these three lenses:

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do you need this sentence here? is this part of societal needs?

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Text Comment. who is the target consumer you are doing the digital consumer journey for?

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which are beyond their price range

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These are not very evident to me .. maybe you should be a chart of the digital consumer journey along each stage in an Appendix to see how the digital opportunities align with the needs/pain points?

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please refer to your table. E.g. See Table 1 above.

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this

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do you think another chart comparing the new system with the old one would be useful to help visualize how the new system would be better?

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label this chart. eg. Figure 1 XXXX

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