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Food Coupon Caption

after liberate (in 1949) food in China was very short, therefore planned economy issued

coupon book started right after liberate

everybody has certain amount of food every month

we all had coupon books

seller would document and sign after each trade

you can clearly see how much you spent

after I left school, I had to go to coupon shop to apply for food coupon

took the coupon book with me to apply for that

people need to apply for the that

no one would just give it to you without application

each province and cities has their own plan for food

national coupon is used when you has a business trip

you need national food coupon in order to go to other places

use local food coupon in exchange of national food coupon

food coupon were used for buying supplies

why did we need it at that time

because the government is relatively short of food

so everyone had certain amount of food

given certain amount of food coupon

two types of food coupon were used

local food coupon and national food coupon

local food coupon can only be used locally

national food coupon can be used everywhere in the country

not only buying rice requires food coupon

all food-related things need food coupon

for example, eating fritters in the morning

therefore it was more difficult for people to work in other places

It's more difficult to get outside of local area

you cannot get outside without national food coupon

you were not able to work outside

no business would hire you in that case

people can only be in one place

what about students

I remember a high school student got about 30 kilograms food coupon per month

food was enough to eat

people who live in the cities sometimes eat something else

so they had more food coupon left

those who live in the rural area did not have any food coupon

because they grew their own food

If they want to come out of the countryside

it will be more difficult

they need to have some food coupons in order to get out

they trade their own food with urban people’s coupon

such as rice, vegetables, eggs

they can go to the cities after exchange

I trade many food coupon with them

for chickens and eggs

I had a lot of free time back then

school was not as strict as nowadays

there was no GaoKao (Higher Education Entrance Examination)

no one really studied hard

we had a lot of free times

although there was food coupon during planned economy

people still need to wait in lines in order to get things

At that time, the streets were so crowd

you have to wait in every places

such as buying meet

people need to come the night before to wait

it’s impossible to stay awake all night

so we will bring basket or brick to line up in advance

then come back at 4 o'clock in the next morning to buy meat

At this time, my brother and I must help the family to do this kind of things

every family need to buy meat

I got bully sometimes

when adult see little kids like me buying meat

although we use the same food coupon

they gave me a lot of fat when I bought a pound of pork

they didn’t gave me lean meat

however my mom only eats lean meat

so it’s not fair for us

I will be mad if the seller gave me fat meat

I insisted that they gave me lean meat

otherwise I will fight with them

soy sauce ,oil and alcohol were in bulk

not like nowadays in bottle or can

soy sauce is daily needs

we use rope to tie a glass bottle and bring it to buy soy sauce

same as buy oil

use buckets or bottles

there were very few plastic products

everyone uses glass bottles

take a glass bottle to buy soy sauce

like i did

people always saw me went to buy soy sauce

so they gave me a nick name called soy sauce boy

in my family, my dad was doing aquatic business

we had plenty of seafood

we don’t even want to eat it anymore

I remember once my parent ask me to eat shrimp

I really don’t like it

so they said if I eat one, they would give me 20 cents

my sister is still judging me about this today

when we were young, my sister wad the leader of buying food in our family

she carry basket and brick to wait in line

not like today we buy everything online

so fast and convenient shopping online now

all the food coupon you see in home was my mother-in-law’s

people bought back food coupon to home every once a while

these were saved bit by bit by her

not from me

how could I save that much food coupon