PLEASE READ DETAILS CAREFULLY!! English assignments due,

Part #1

Please post your most recent, revised thesis statement for peer-review.  You began exploring a topic, moved to a tentative position or conclusion on that topic in your first draft last week, and now, after completing your Annotated Bibliography, should have a much clearer stance on your topic.  Please follow the following format:

1. Post your former working thesis statement. 

2. Post your latest revision of that thesis statement.

3. Add a brief (50 words or more) evaluation of how you see it "evolving" from your last version

: My former theseis statement was:

Part#2

Please post your most recent draft of your Research Paper.   Your 2nd draft should incorporate the following features as you revise it this week:

1.  A revised thesis statement.

2.  Evidence of clearly stated claims and/or the use of a "claims sandwich" when presenting evidence such as summaries or direct quotations.

3.  A well-developed introduction leading the reader logically toward your thesis .

4.  APA style in-text citations and an APA style References list.

5.  Strong integration of summaries with Signal Phrases. 

Also include : Please submit your second draft of your Research Paper. This week's revision should include smooth and accurate integration of your evidence --whether summary, paraphrase, direct quotation, or figures and charts-- using accurate APA in-text citations, running commentaries, and/or Signal Phrases. This draft should also demonstrate the concept of the "claims sandwich" by clearly presenting a claim at the beginning of a paragraph, smoothly integrating a summary or direct quotation, and closing the paragraph with a restatement of how the claim is relevant/meaningful. This draft should also contain a References list at the end of the draft.

Part #3