Sociology paper revision
Good draft, remember that we are testing you on your understanding of the concepts and theories, so you must be able to explain them in the paper and then you may speak about how it is or is not applicable to your topic.
Completion of assignment: 15/20 Following instructions: 15/20 Grammar and writing mechanics: 15/20 Effective engagement with original text: 15/20 Coherence of writing: 15/20 Total: 75/100