missing conclusion in overall case study analysis along with the correlation with the text book information in regards to global health issues.
Michelle_Michy
firstdrafterrors.docx1. Did you create a cover page with student ID, name, professor name, title of your paper (capitalize major words and it is based on your problem or recommendations), date format (June 9, 2016), and approved school logo?
2. Is your reference page based on the last name of the author?
3. Did you make sure there is no bullets and you used paragraph format (at least 5 sentence in a paragraph) when writing your analysis and recommendation and implementation section?
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Please address all the "NO" from the check list and re-work your first draft. Also, please use the attached paper to this email since I have provided you some feedback and made some changes. Remove the literature review from your paper and incorporate the material in the appropriate section of the paper. You need to follow your approved outline. In addition, remove the logo from each page. The logo should be only on the cover letter. Please send me your second draft for review. |
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